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I simply find out how to get two hours of sleep. A walled bastion around your neck is steep. Elitists commend this moderate landmark. While visiting vacationers all around the park. Here's the way your body will in general look. Arms are stone squares stained with a nook. A fleece tee lands on the body with a thud. Despite that, late spring clothing is very scud. They linger the same as wet palm fronds.  To the path, skirting the drain's ponds  Your toe pain is a metaphor for it anyway.  I squirreled away in a pair of boots to stay. On the road, the eyelids are shovels. The white line devours the car's labels.
Written: November 14, 2021

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Date: 11/16/2021 1:36:00 PM
Creative work you have penned. I am wondering what those eyelids stand for. Anyway, it is very descriptive and I enjoyed reading it. Maybe I will figure it out in a little while. Thank you for stopping by my page. Your visit is appreciated. Sara
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Date: 11/15/2021 1:55:00 PM
Some of the lines here are SO clever with the metaphors. Loved the one about eyelids as shovels!!
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