Two Ships - 3rd Place

Two dead ships on shores 
that settled their scores.  
They died together, 
one stormy weather;
For, grudge is lethal 
and war is fatal. 

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3rd place
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Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 3:14 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Roger -
Roger  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Thank you very much...
Merryman Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Well done, Roger! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Roger  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much...
May Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Very nicely penned Roger, Congrats on your win
Roger  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much...
Campanella Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Hello, Roger Carvis - Tiny Window a voice to be heard - l Liked - "For, grudge is lethal war is fatal." Good Luck - stay safe too! Perry C.
Roger  Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Thank you very much...
Rolland Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 11:30 PM
beautiful, poem, wars are dangerous and not human, thanks a lot
Roger  Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 2:38 AM
Thank you very much...
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