Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Tail-rhyme

Two Sad Sights

Walking in a park with sad heart
My muse not giving a good start
Saw two sad sights.

Crippled dancer in custom dress
Singer with scratchy voice in stress
Moved by the sights.

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March 10, 2014
Form : Tail Rhymes
Dr. Ram mehta
Fifth Place win
Contest: The Blues by Black eyed Susan

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Robin Davis June 4, 2014 at 8:58 PM Dr. Ram This is so heart touching and sad. To have a talent and lose it from something going wrong. Thank you for the nice comment on my Wild Night poem.

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2014 at 5:13 PM DR RAM, Congratulations, enjoyed the win... Love ~Linda

Debbie Guzzi March 27, 2014 at 4:55 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May March 25, 2014 at 8:17 AM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Joyce Johnson March 24, 2014 at 7:35 PM Tender write. Congratulations Dr. Mehta. Love, Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2014 at 5:50 PM yours was so interesting to read. I remember it from before. Congrats!

Robert Johnson March 24, 2014 at 3:33 PM Congrats Doc. Speaks to the soul of the creative soul.

D.W. Rodgers March 24, 2014 at 1:26 PM Congrats on your fine win

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2014 at 6:06 PM That would be sad to see two people with talents but handicapped in those talents. well done!

Sara Kendrick March 10, 2014 at 2:51 PM Reads like a winner in poetic expression but not so with the entertainers..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Robert Johnson March 10, 2014 at 10:57 AM Glad you were blessed with inspiration. :) Thanks for your kind comments on my poems. Soup mail.

Sandip Goswami March 10, 2014 at 10:12 AM I saw them in a train ...Very sad...But I enjoyed their love on own dream...Nice Sir..Best wishes from my heart...

Shadow Hamilton March 10, 2014 at 7:17 AM good pen Ram hugs