Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Triolet

Two Roses

I got two roses on this dark night
My heart was full with delight
All seemed turned lovely bright

Blues and yellow lights in sight
Didn't hide the sparkle in my eye
Moreover, you got me all magnetized

My heart has been a little while dead
Flat line from continuous breaks and bled
Thus,"Be careful", my mind always said

Someday...
Yes, someday...

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olive_eloisa
1:36 am
April 09, 2014

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Sara Kendrick April 24, 2014 at 4:29 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit..I was having trouble posting a poem so I did an imaginary poem to see if it would post and it did you know my "xxxx" poem..Then when I tried to post my real poem it would not post..I did get one to go through a litle while ago..I am glad that you got two roses so that your heart would be lifted..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 24, 2014 at 4:48 PM :) Thanks Sara.. My heart I keep it always lifted up.. :) God bless us all. :)

Mel Merrill April 17, 2014 at 11:35 PM Hi Olive. What a well-crafted, imagistic poem. Nicely done, my friend. Peace, Mel :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2014 at 3:23 AM Thanks so much MEL.. :) I'm glad you like it.. :) your pal as well, olive.. :)

Justin Bordner April 13, 2014 at 1:02 AM I know this caution, hey, risk is apart of good life too, just be ready, and flexible. J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 13, 2014 at 7:34 AM hahhaaha yes of course am taking risk.. :) am no afraid to take one if i really feel it could go far. :) Thanks for the drop by.. :) God bless you :)

Paul Callus April 10, 2014 at 4:14 PM Hi Olive_eloi...have I heard of these 2 roses somewhere?:) glad they managed to put brightness in a dark night. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 12, 2014 at 11:22 AM Hahahahahhaha.. :) yes I mention it in one of my mails:)thanks for the drop by

Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 6:06 PM You are so sweet Olive, I read this out loud. I expressed it in a way, that made me enjoy the poem. Of course I had to read the poem twice. I wonder who got you and caught your googly eyes.... I'm glad your heart speaks to you, a cute little reminder... hugs.. Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 9, 2014 at 6:19 PM Thanks PD..... :) hahahha none yet actually I was just touched by the gesture..:)

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2014 at 5:43 PM If the right person gifts you with a single rose it becomes priceless. Any Rose will blush in the presence of your beautiful heart. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 9, 2014 at 5:54 PM Yes one single rose will do.. Anyhow the thought is what count most... Loool we are on modern times but I really still am apt for the traditional way...

Lucilla Carrillo April 8, 2014 at 11:41 PM Lovely poem, but as Arthur says - you should have gotten two dozen, but sometimes one would be enough. thanks for sharing... Lucilla Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 9, 2014 at 4:34 AM the roses are of different color.. :) one red and one white.. :) come with a card.. :) :) +thanks for dropping by lucilla.. ;)

Arthur Vaso April 8, 2014 at 9:59 PM For some one as sweet as you, I should think 2 dozen , lovely poem! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 9, 2014 at 4:32 AM :) hahaha :) thanks for dropping by.. :) I didn't expect.. the thought is more than enough.. :)