Two Roses

I got two roses on this dark night
My heart was full with delight
All seemed turned lovely bright

Blues and yellow lights in sight
Didn't hide the sparkle in my eye
Moreover, you got me all magnetized

My heart has been a little while dead
Flat line from continuous breaks and bled
Thus,"Be careful", my mind always said

Someday...
Yes, someday...

by
olive_eloisa
1:36 am
April 09, 2014

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2014 4:29:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit..I was having trouble posting a poem so I did an imaginary poem to see if it would post and it did you know my "xxxx" poem..Then when I tried to post my real poem it would not post..I did get one to go through a litle while ago..I am glad that you got two roses so that your heart would be lifted..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/24/2014 4:48:00 PM

:) Thanks Sara.. My heart I keep it always lifted up.. :) God bless us all. :)

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/17/2014 11:35:00 PM

Hi Olive. What a well-crafted, imagistic poem. Nicely done, my friend. Peace, Mel :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/19/2014 3:23:00 AM

Thanks so much MEL.. :) I'm glad you like it.. :) your pal as well, olive.. :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/13/2014 1:02:00 AM

I know this caution, hey, risk is apart of good life too, just be ready, and flexible. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2014 7:34:00 AM

hahhaaha yes of course am taking risk.. :) am no afraid to take one if i really feel it could go far. :) Thanks for the drop by.. :) God bless you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/10/2014 4:14:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi...have I heard of these 2 roses somewhere?:) glad they managed to put brightness in a dark night. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/12/2014 11:22:00 AM

Hahahahahhaha.. :) yes I mention it in one of my mails:)thanks for the drop by

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 6:06:00 PM

You are so sweet Olive, I read this out loud. I expressed it in a way, that made me enjoy the poem. Of course I had to read the poem twice. I wonder who got you and caught your googly eyes.... I'm glad your heart speaks to you, a cute little reminder... hugs.. Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2014 6:19:00 PM

Thanks PD..... :) hahahha none yet actually I was just touched by the gesture..:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2014 5:43:00 PM

If the right person gifts you with a single rose it becomes priceless. Any Rose will blush in the presence of your beautiful heart.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2014 5:54:00 PM

Yes one single rose will do.. Anyhow the thought is what count most... Loool we are on modern times but I really still am apt for the traditional way...