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Two Returns For Manchester

Trinity Street, Bolton, it was Jack and Jaya’s first date, Jack had got there early, worried he’d be late, the ticket woman said, to head for platform two, “you’ll have to get a move on though, your train is almost due”, from Moses Gate to Manchester, the world went flashing by, factories and football fields, beneath a clouded sky, soon the train screeched to a halt, with much anticipation, our young couple disembarked, and left Victoria Station, Jack and Jaya walked and talked, round Manchester for hours, Jack laughed and said that “their town hall, is not nice as ours!”, in Piccadilly Gardens, Jaya groaned at more of his jokes, whilst they ate cheese pasties, and shared a can of Coke, travelling back Jack wondered, about a kiss on the cheek, but Jaya simply smiled and said, “let’s try Wigan next week…”.

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Date: 2/13/2024 1:10:00 AM
I was really pleased with this poem. Essentially it is about two teenagers from Bolton meeting up for a first date. Although they may have excitement and anticipation, they don't have much money. Bolton is a fairly multicultural town (reflected in the choice of names). Bolton is only 12 miles from it's biggest neighbour, Manchester (reflected in references to local rivalries). Though Jack does most of the talking, ultimately it's Jaya who has the last word here.
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Date: 2/9/2024 7:32:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Martin Challender
Date: 2/13/2024 1:13:00 AM
Thank you.

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