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Two Ravens In the Night

O’er the waters of time, with attention quickly drawn, I, Thought, soar through the heavens with Memory at my side. By thorn and thicket, we have passed. At times we've struggled through, as all around us tears and shreds, and yet... time we abide. Travel we, birds of like feather; black as night and strong as day, A reflection, one to another; two arrows taking flight. We chance upon the wind, unyielding as the grave, Our ballad, sight and sorrow; two ravens in the night. 7/13/2014 (Inspired by Huginn and Muninn, Odin's two ravens)

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Date: 8/23/2015 11:28:00 PM
still as awesome... SK
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Date: 12/22/2014 7:12:00 PM
love it...like ravens on the razorwire
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Date: 8/5/2014 7:31:00 AM
This meal was so sumptuous to my mind's imagination! Congrats to your well, deserved win Christopher! :-)
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:11:00 PM
What an enjoyable read! Well done on topping the winners list. :)
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:35:00 AM
Congrats on this fine win Christopher!!
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:19:00 AM
Congrats Christopher on ur winning wonderful write !
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Date: 8/3/2014 10:52:00 AM
Interesting! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Christopher.... Have a nice day... Linda
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:03:00 AM
lovely top win, congrats. Mohan
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Date: 8/2/2014 5:54:00 PM
Hi Christopher. It is so refreshing to read something intellectual, clever, balanced and so well crafted with precise and concise language. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Earl
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Date: 8/2/2014 4:13:00 PM
you captured the Norse spirit well Chris congrats on win and ty too for entering
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:13:00 PM
Christopher, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Christopher.
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:35:00 AM
Hi Christopher, huge congratulations on your fine well-deserved win. Pandita
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:35:00 PM
Congrats on a beautiful win, Christopher, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/27/2014 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and nice win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:37:00 PM
Christopher, I have not seen you in some time. How nice to have you on my winners' list. Your poem has a "classic" feel to it. Congrats in my contest.
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