Two Prayers of Praise

Oh God, I attend thy church proudly
Secure in my self-righteous pew
I sing and recite to thee loudly
A few hours, then I bid thee adieu 
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Oh God, I pray make me humble
I bow before Your ageless might
I grope and I fumble and stumble
Searching for Your Divine Light


Matthew 6: 5-6
“And when you pray, do not be like the hypocrites, for they love to pray standing 
in the synagogues and on the street corners to be seen by others. Truly I tell 
you, they have received their reward in full. But when you pray, go into your 
room, close the door and pray to your Father, who is unseen. Then your Father, 
who sees what is done in secret, will reward you"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 12:11 PM
unique handle for the theme... one of my faves, tim.. sweet congrats and huggs
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 8:20 AM
What a beautiful poem to read for my early morning Tim. And a winner in a contest also wow I picked the best one to read today. I would love to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. Have a wonderful day and happy writing. Love, Carol
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Awesome write Tim n a great win! Big congrats!
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Conbgratulations on a fine win in the contest, Tim
Lindley Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Congrats on your win Tim!
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 2:38 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 12:11 PM
- Tim,congratulation on your winning poem in: "Finding God" - Contest - Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - Skillfully rhyme and beautifully written ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 6:53 PM
We can always tell the true believers from the hypocrites, Tim. Enjoyed the poem's spiritual quality and liked the message beneath it as well! Good luck in Gail's Contest. (I could not edit our co-write, so I had to enter it as is in Vie's contest. Apostrophes have been banned. :D ) Best wishes in Gail's contest. True prayers and blessings, Carolyn
Lamoureux Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 6:21 PM
You added the perfect scripture to conclude your heart felt poem.
Mehta Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Love the write on god and spirituality, Tim
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:00 AM
- Lovely prayer, Tim - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:48 AM
Striking attack to the theme but these somehow the truth some pray with so much loudness but seeing their hearts and souls only flaws and nothing but fraud ness.. Only our God can see the heart.. In silence and loudness of our prayers the most important is we are praying in spirit and truth..... The sincerity and application of our prayers will clearly lead us in Finding God in the midst of everything.. God bless you Tim..:)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:50 AM
There are allot of verses in the. Bible that permits loud prayers, worship and praises yet it do emphasize the sincerity and pureness that must be incorporated within these acts.... As it says in Ephesians... In spirit and truth..:)
Harrell Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Yes!
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Yes, there are some who love to pray loudly and proudly. I don't know. Some of the TV evangelists strike me as a bit "off" this is a very good approach for that contest, Tim.
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Very clever write Tim - don't they say empty vessels make the most noise! Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Ryerson Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 6:46 PM
Yes indeed they do Jan...Thanks for your kind comments and support my friend - Tim
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