Chris Green Poet Free verse

Two Poetic Hydrangea Mobiles - Happy Or Sad, Take Your Pick

Two poetic hydrangea mobiles ~ happy or sad, take your pick 

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Weeping hydrangeas spill
sapphire tears falling,
drenching grey scale gardens
suspended, free flowing
a mobile of distractions
on tiny threads scattered
above clouded daydreams
Worded floating silent streams,
spinning slowly, creating phrases
on whirlwind petals,
browned edges frame 
whispered wonderings
sans answers
upon somber breezes
of yesterday’s questions

or

A cappella Hydrangeas
send harmonic petals floating
upon melodic wind chime breezes,
suspended soft concerto clouds
on love sonnet strings
tuned to a spring day,
as flowering symphonies,
acoustic mobiles of emotion
bloom within a garden
of daffodils dreams
in unison with lyrical
compositions of nature’s
enchanting song

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Heidi Sands August 29, 2019 at 5:39 PM This is amazing how you wrote this. I love them both. Maybe the first one a bit more, but they seem best together ! You brought us some fun ones today. :) Chris Green August 30, 2019 at 7:44 AM Thank you so much Heidi. When I wrote these and looked at them, they appeared like mobiles so that is where the title came from. I am happy these touched you today

Connie Marcum Wong August 29, 2019 at 5:12 PM There is brilliance in both of these beauties Chris. If a heart is weeping then the first poem would be more relatable. However the second one made my heart soar. I am Faving both! Thank you for brightening my day. xxoo : ) Chris Green August 29, 2019 at 5:15 PM Thank you Connie. You always brighten my day when you stop by. I appreciate you my friend.

Jan Allison August 29, 2019 at 4:50 PM absolutely breath taking Chris. I have a pink hydrangea in my front garden, given to us as an anniversary present by a friend who is sadly no longer with us but I think of her every day and this year the plant is magnificent with a mass of flower heads that you can hardly see the leaves!:-) hugs Jan xx Chris Green August 29, 2019 at 5:00 PM Thanks so much Jan. I had a friend who is very fond of hydrangeas so I wrote these with her in mind.

Elizabeth Kinch August 29, 2019 at 4:04 PM Chris I'm in awe of your magnificent poems. Chris Green August 29, 2019 at 4:27 PM Thank you so much Elizabeth. I am thrilled you enjoy them. I appreciate you.

Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2019 at 3:47 PM Lovely! Sometimes we need sad but I choose happy today! Chris Green August 29, 2019 at 4:27 PM I'm with you. Thanks my friend.

Hello There August 29, 2019 at 3:04 PM I like each, but the second one was so uplifting, gravity began losing its hold on me. If only I could hear them.. I have two of these beauties, but never thought of them in this way. Thanks for sharing this beautiful song and image ~ Chris Green August 29, 2019 at 3:17 PM Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment. I appreciate your visit today and the kindness you have shown me. I am thrilled you enjoyed these. The second is my favorite.