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Two Pisces

I walk the sea the sea walks me along dancing waves of green salinity caressing my feet... Towards the west the sun sinks off to New Orleans, orange and red hues paint my senses... In New Orleans beer drenched misty bars host jazz musicians playing a purple and yellow Mardi Gras toot... Back in Biloxi the sea is breathing rising and falling... The moon is sighing to a love lorn sea... In my pocket a picture of a girl building sand castles... Sister of the sea pisces by birth... the stars shine on my city soon sky will open sea green turning to sea blue... None matches the beauty I see gazing at you...

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Date: 11/11/2013 10:46:00 PM
Ken This is a charming and peaceful write. The imagery pulled me in and took me on a ride of harmony and serenity I had to read this cause I am a fishie sign. LOL Thanks for the nice comment on my Poets Masterpiece poem.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/11/2013 10:49:00 PM
Hi Robin, Thank you my fellow pisces! Ken
Date: 9/1/2013 2:23:00 PM
The title of this poem just caught my eye, because I am a Pisces, as well.... This is a very beautiful and touching piece, Ken. I really enjoyed it!.....Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, "Lonely Soul". It means a lot!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/1/2013 2:31:00 PM
HI Kelly, Thanks for stopping by and leaving kind feedback.. Ken

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