Two Pisces

I walk the sea
the sea walks me
along dancing waves

of green salinity
caressing my feet...

Towards the west
the sun sinks
off to New Orleans,

orange and red hues
paint my senses...

In New Orleans
beer drenched misty bars
host jazz musicians

playing a purple and yellow
Mardi Gras toot...

Back in Biloxi
the sea is breathing
rising and falling...

The moon is sighing
to a love lorn sea...

In my pocket
a picture of a girl
building sand castles...

Sister of the sea
pisces by birth...

the stars shine on my city
soon sky will open
sea green turning to sea blue...

None matches the beauty
I see gazing at you...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/11/2013 10:46:00 PM
Ken This is a charming and peaceful write. The imagery pulled me in and took me on a ride of harmony and serenity I had to read this cause I am a fishie sign. LOL Thanks for the nice comment on my Poets Masterpiece poem.
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Date: 11/11/2013 10:49:00 PM
Hi Robin, Thank you my fellow pisces! Ken
Date: 9/1/2013 2:23:00 PM
The title of this poem just caught my eye, because I am a Pisces, as well.... This is a very beautiful and touching piece, Ken. I really enjoyed it!.....Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, "Lonely Soul". It means a lot!
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:31:00 PM
HI Kelly, Thanks for stopping by and leaving kind feedback.. Ken
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