Two Paths

There's
a path
that
leads to
heavenly
realms where
God
and His
glory dwell.
A narrow path
that few will 
choose. But
wide
is the
path and
easy
that 
leads to
hell.

6/6/15
The form I used here is called a "Waltz Wave"
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Christian Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Amen so much wisdom and truth, we on the right road that's for sure, God bless you, Thank you for your kind comments
Merryman Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, Diane!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:16 PM
An important message to share...to the point, and I love the form, Kim. Thanks for sharing it with us! Hugs, Rhonda
Merryman Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Rhonda!
Nance Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 4:55 PM
Oh so smart this write is, and I agree, wide is the path and easy that leads to hell. Well done :)
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Casarah! I'm glad you liked it.
Arrow Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 2:56 AM
We must choose the right path...lovely Kim
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Thank you, CA! The choice is always ours.
Allison Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 2:06 AM
wise words indeed and what an unusual form Kim:-) Hugs jan xx
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Jan! I plan on using this form for a contest as soon as TPS fixes the glitch and I can open one.
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