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Tanka Winter and cloudy At the hotel by the sea Misfortune and ghosts No change for the gas metre Long walks and bitter overcoat Tanka Anchored in the bay The old ship tug anchor No new charter Abandoned by her owner Humiliating rust drips.

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Date: 2/18/2013 8:06:00 AM
Pretty sad, Jan. Sad old tug.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 2/18/2013 12:06:00 PM
that´s life dear

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