Two Monks At the Temple Gate In Anji

Amidst saffron robes nail-bit hand reveals
mobile
phone

Laughing-robed companion brandishes
ice cream
cone

Shaved-headed naughty boys practice
chanting
tones

Humble golden temple gates peeling paint
stone on
stone


V. Anderson-Throop          22 May 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 12:56 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Victoria, i like this very much. LINDA
Horsman Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 4:40 PM
This is brilliant Victoria, the old meets the new, just looking at your poems, hope you are well..
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Beautiful imagery. Do you have more?
A  Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Well expressed
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