Two Lugworms At the Beach

Sitting near the ocean's edge,
with my ever present pad and pen,
I watch a lugworm burrow down
through the muddy cracks and crevices
in the wet sand, perhaps creating his own  
underground moats and castles.

And like this lowly lugworm, I, too,
burrow down through the sand, searching
in every crack, cranny and crevice
for just the right word to finish my poem.

I run my fingers through the sand,
each grain a word.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Clemons Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Nice Poem, Darlene. The connection of the lugworm to your search for poetic words is greatly expressed. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
Gifford Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Thanks, Jiril, for your comments and of course I'll go right now and read some of your poems. I appreciate your invite as I'm rather new here (a few months) and trying to make friends with other poets to connect with.
Yvonne Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Excellent again, I just love the way you write.
Gifford Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 12:54 PM
That goes both ways, Maurice, from one poet to another. I am happy to claim you as a poet friend and someone to share thoughts and poems with.
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