Two Lovers

Two lovers hearts beating gently, entwine like thornless ramblings roses in full bloom, exposing beauty like full bodied wine glistening in shadows of the full moon, blissfully relaxed in loves waiting room, their world belongs only to them their dream pastel rainbow warm multi colour scheme affection made from heavenly design, loves arrows delivered on a moonbeam with love directly from saint valentine. Composed 18/01/2017 Contest Valentine in form D, Sponsored by broken wings.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2017 9:41:00 PM

this is so sweet, Roy. I'm glad to see you a winner here. Congrats!

Roy Pett
Date: 1/22/2017 3:10:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea for your very kind comment this is encouraging, thanks again Roy.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2017 8:22:00 AM

Congrats, Roy!

Roy Pett
Date: 1/21/2017 8:48:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2017 3:55:00 AM

- A lovely Valentine poem, Roy - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 1/19/2017 5:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Anne-Lise, I'm not very confident when posting and entering the competitions so really appreciate it when I get a comment from accomplished poets like you, so thank you, Roy.