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Two Lenses

Gas
balloon
was the thing
I longed to buy
in my childhood days.
Because it could fly high
in the sky taking my wishes
with it to the height I'd never reach.
Expedition to the world of unknown...

Now, gas balloons can not enthral my mind
Because, I know, how it feels at height
Fears crept in to eat my dreams
Terrors haunt my peaceful soul
Now, I know flying is not 
that easy; what I
used to think in
my dream-filled 
childhood
days.

26.02.16

I have used Etheree and Reverse Etheree.

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Sarita Milliner Date: 3/6/2016 11:30:00 AM Creatively pinned!! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 3/7/2016 1:27:00 AM Thanks a lot, Sarita. Hugs, Bobby

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Paul Callus Date: 2/28/2016 9:49:00 AM I enjoyed your double Etheree, Bobby; childhood dreams are so important at the time, but time puts them into perspective. Congrats on a deserved win. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 2/28/2016 12:10:00 PM Thank you, Paul. Truly honoured. Warm regards, Bobby

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Probir Gupta Date: 2/28/2016 3:58:00 AM Attractive form. A nice poem. Congratulations... Login to Reply Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 2/28/2016 6:45:00 AM Thank you, Sir. Respectful greetings, Bobby

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Susan Gentry Date: 2/27/2016 12:23:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Very creative and clever. Login to Reply Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 2/27/2016 9:42:00 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, this time I have played clever. I have used Etheree and Reverse to create a Shape. Love & Hugs, Bobby

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/27/2016 11:38:00 AM I enjoyed reading your work..I like the thought "Now I know flying is not that easy" then "my dream-filled childhood days.".Thanks for entering..Sara Login to Reply Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 2/27/2016 11:58:00 AM Thank you so very much, Sara. Happy to know that my humble words have touched your heart. Enjoying the rain of your blessings and encouraging words. Love and Hugs, Bobby