Anindya Mohan Tagore Poet Etheree

Two Lenses

Gas
balloon
was the thing
I longed to buy
in my childhood days.
Because it could fly high
in the sky taking my wishes
with it to the height I'd never reach.
Expedition to the world of unknown...

Now, gas balloons can not enthral my mind
Because, I know, how it feels at height
Fears crept in to eat my dreams
Terrors haunt my peaceful soul
Now, I know flying is not 
that easy; what I
used to think in
my dream-filled 
childhood
days.

26.02.16

I have used Etheree and Reverse Etheree.

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Sarita Milliner March 6, 2016 at 11:30 AM Creatively pinned!! Congratulations on your win! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 7, 2016 at 1:27 AM Thanks a lot, Sarita. Hugs, Bobby

Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 7:33 AM You are so sweet .. Bobby. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 5, 2016 at 7:41 AM I am so fortunate to get love, honour and blessings from you people. Feeling orange. :-)

Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 4:43 AM Congratulations Anindya Mohan Tagore March 5, 2016 at 7:21 AM Thank you so very much, Linda. XOXO, Bobby

Charlie Smith February 29, 2016 at 10:51 PM Many.style points. Congrats on the win, and many mote to come. Charlie Anindya Mohan Tagore March 1, 2016 at 1:27 AM Thanks a lot, Charlie. Hugs, Bobby

Sathya Babu February 29, 2016 at 9:30 PM Many Congrats on your win.....the style is simply great. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 1, 2016 at 1:26 AM Thank you so very much, Sathya. Hugs, Bobby

Teddy Kimathi February 29, 2016 at 3:49 AM Greetings Anindya. Congrats for your top placement with this amazing diamond-shaped verse!!! ;-) Anindya Mohan Tagore February 29, 2016 at 5:20 AM Thanks a lot, Teddy. Hugs, Bobby

Jan Allison February 28, 2016 at 3:32 PM Beautifully penned Bobby I really love the form you used:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 9:16 PM Thanks a lot Jan. Truly honoured. Hugs, Bobby

Paul Callus February 28, 2016 at 9:49 AM I enjoyed your double Etheree, Bobby; childhood dreams are so important at the time, but time puts them into perspective. Congrats on a deserved win. ~ Regards // paul Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 12:10 PM Thank you, Paul. Truly honoured. Warm regards, Bobby

Archana Garg February 28, 2016 at 7:12 AM Agreed, things change and they must be accepted... Congratulations....... Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 12:09 PM Thank you, Archana. Warm regards, Bobby

Probir Gupta February 28, 2016 at 3:58 AM Attractive form. A nice poem. Congratulations... Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Sir. Respectful greetings, Bobby

Anisha Dutta February 28, 2016 at 2:38 AM Congrats Anidya to win. I like ths form most. Well done! Anisha Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 6:44 AM Thank you Di... Hugs, Bobby

Susan Gentry February 27, 2016 at 12:23 PM Congratulations on your win! Very creative and clever. Anindya Mohan Tagore February 27, 2016 at 9:42 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, this time I have played clever. I have used Etheree and Reverse to create a Shape. Love & Hugs, Bobby

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2016 at 11:38 AM I enjoyed reading your work..I like the thought "Now I know flying is not that easy" then "my dream-filled childhood days.".Thanks for entering..Sara Anindya Mohan Tagore February 27, 2016 at 11:58 AM Thank you so very much, Sara. Happy to know that my humble words have touched your heart. Enjoying the rain of your blessings and encouraging words. Love and Hugs, Bobby