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Gas balloon was the thing I longed to buy in my childhood days. Because it could fly high in the sky taking my wishes with it to the height I'd never reach. Expedition to the world of unknown... Now, gas balloons can not enthral my mind Because, I know, how it feels at height Fears crept in to eat my dreams Terrors haunt my peaceful soul Now, I know flying is not that easy; what I used to think in my dream-filled childhood days. 26.02.16 I have used Etheree and Reverse Etheree.

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Date: 3/6/2016 11:30:00 AM
Creatively pinned!! Congratulations on your win!
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/7/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Sarita. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/5/2016 7:33:00 AM
You are so sweet .. Bobby.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/5/2016 7:41:00 AM
I am so fortunate to get love, honour and blessings from you people. Feeling orange. :-)
Date: 3/5/2016 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/5/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Linda. XOXO, Bobby
Date: 2/29/2016 10:51:00 PM
Many.style points. Congrats on the win, and many mote to come. Charlie
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/1/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Charlie. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/29/2016 9:30:00 PM
Many Congrats on your win.....the style is simply great.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/1/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sathya. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/29/2016 3:49:00 AM
Greetings Anindya. Congrats for your top placement with this amazing diamond-shaped verse!!! ;-)
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/29/2016 5:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Teddy. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/28/2016 3:32:00 PM
Beautifully penned Bobby I really love the form you used:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/28/2016 9:16:00 PM
Thanks a lot Jan. Truly honoured. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/28/2016 9:49:00 AM
I enjoyed your double Etheree, Bobby; childhood dreams are so important at the time, but time puts them into perspective. Congrats on a deserved win. ~ Regards // paul
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/28/2016 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Truly honoured. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/28/2016 7:12:00 AM
Agreed, things change and they must be accepted... Congratulations.......
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/28/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Archana. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 2/28/2016 3:58:00 AM
Attractive form. A nice poem. Congratulations...
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/28/2016 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, Sir. Respectful greetings, Bobby
Date: 2/28/2016 2:38:00 AM
Congrats Anidya to win. I like ths form most. Well done! Anisha
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/28/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Di... Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/27/2016 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Very creative and clever.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/27/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, this time I have played clever. I have used Etheree and Reverse to create a Shape. Love & Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/27/2016 11:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your work..I like the thought "Now I know flying is not that easy" then "my dream-filled childhood days.".Thanks for entering..Sara
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/27/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sara. Happy to know that my humble words have touched your heart. Enjoying the rain of your blessings and encouraging words. Love and Hugs, Bobby

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