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In the exuberant morning sun Showcasing the self was an obsession Cricket swimming jumping very high Flying the kite high up in the blue sky In the mellow glee of afternoon Seeing and waiting is the mind's moon Around your neck my arms in a loop Relaxing happily in Poetry Soup -------------------------------------------------- February 15, 2016

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Date: 3/5/2016 8:10:00 AM
Anytime
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2016 8:12:00 AM
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:54:00 AM
Awesome win
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2016 8:09:00 AM
Is it? Thanks...
Date: 2/29/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara..Ahh!! The joy of finding fun on soup which replaces some of our childhood fun time..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/29/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thank you for the encomium. Thank you for the kind placement too.
Date: 2/28/2016 7:22:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Sir. Warm regards, Bobby
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Anindya...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Anindya...
Date: 2/27/2016 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your delightful win! I enjoyed reading this. Big smile at the last line.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/27/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thanks my dear co-souper coming close from so far.
Date: 2/16/2016 10:25:00 AM
'...relaxing happily in Poetry Soup!' what can be a better time than this... lovely phrasing and imagery! Well done Probir! Best wishes, Keith
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/16/2016 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Keith...