Probir Gupta Poet Verse

Two Lenses

In the exuberant morning sun
Showcasing the self was an obsession
Cricket swimming jumping very high
Flying the kite high up in the blue sky

In the mellow glee of afternoon
Seeing and waiting is the mind's moon
Around your neck my arms in a loop
Relaxing happily in Poetry Soup
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February 15, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 8:10 AM Anytime Probir Gupta March 5, 2016 at 8:12 AM ?

Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 4:54 AM Awesome win Probir Gupta March 5, 2016 at 8:10 AM Thank you... Probir Gupta March 5, 2016 at 8:09 AM Is it? Thanks...

Sara Kendrick February 29, 2016 at 8:30 AM Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara..Ahh!! The joy of finding fun on soup which replaces some of our childhood fun time.. Probir Gupta February 29, 2016 at 9:00 AM Thank you for the encomium. Thank you for the kind placement too.

Anindya Mohan Tagore February 28, 2016 at 7:22 AM Lovely imagery, Sir. Warm regards, Bobby Probir Gupta February 28, 2016 at 9:16 AM Thank you Anindya... Probir Gupta February 28, 2016 at 9:13 AM Thank you Anindya...

Susan Gentry February 27, 2016 at 4:38 PM Congratulations on your delightful win! I enjoyed reading this. Big smile at the last line. Probir Gupta February 27, 2016 at 8:52 PM Thanks my dear co-souper coming close from so far.

Keith Bickerstaffe February 16, 2016 at 10:25 AM '...relaxing happily in Poetry Soup!' what can be a better time than this... lovely phrasing and imagery! Well done Probir! Best wishes, Keith Probir Gupta February 16, 2016 at 11:12 AM Thank you Keith...