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Two Left Feet

I tried
bending words
with sincere hope
only to discover my right intentions
went left!




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.......For Barbara's Contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/11/2011 8:34:00 PM

soft smile!! Please enter my contest Jamie..it's taking forever to fill! HELP Light & Love

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/29/2010 7:52:00 AM

Jimbo an awesome write.. Interesting way of bringing your point across ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2010 2:16:00 PM

Hey, was this the apologies contest. Clever way to put it, my friend!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/28/2010 10:43:00 AM

aack that sure is a bummer when that happens-- very cute write you have here Jimbo -- enjoyed reading this :) --nikko :)

James Peranteau

Date: 12/26/2010 2:08:00 PM

A fantastic write Mr. Goff ! How often I find myself facing left when wanting to go right(write) *smiles* ! Have a wonderful New year dear poet ! much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 9:17:00 AM

I am bamboozled by your creativity...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 8:53:00 AM

Fantastic intellectual and qualitative write, Jimbo. Happy Holidays

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/26/2010 2:18:00 AM

what an original way of expressing a distraught feeling, james.. utterly fanatstic, and good luck in the contest... nette

Constance La France

Date: 12/25/2010 9:41:00 PM

I like this poem, yes sometimes no matter what we say it is not going to make it "right", it is a terrific entry for the Barb's contest, best of luck~~

Two Left Feet

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