Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Two Kinds of Friends

leaving me quite drenched
she has snatched my umbrella. . . 
the rainy day friend

we are giggling
under a shared umbrella. . . 
best friends forever

for PD's Haiku Contest
(Inspired by Picture #4 which was a quote about friendship)

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Skat A May 16, 2015 at 11:43 AM you are the sweetest

Phyllis Babcock June 12, 2013 at 9:51 PM Sounds like they were having fun these rainy day friends. Nice one. love phyl

Daver Austin June 5, 2013 at 10:13 AM Don't talk to me about rain. My asthma is terrible because of the humidity. You must be a true friend to put up with an umbrella snatcher. Love, daver

Painted Hunter June 3, 2013 at 1:16 PM rainy day friend...HA! Love that, Andrea. I think I have some of those.

Jack Horne June 1, 2013 at 3:42 PM lol, hope you have more friends like the girl in the second haiku

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 2:39 PM Ahhh!! Congrats on your great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Seosamh De Burca May 30, 2013 at 6:31 PM Nicely set moment and captured so well. I really enjoy your poems.

Heather Ober May 30, 2013 at 5:39 PM This is adorable!! What a sweet moment. To answer your question, the painting I chose for Isaiah's contest was not one of the paintings he included on his contest page. None of those "spoke" to me, so I googled George Dunlop Leslie and found one I liked :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 30, 2013 at 10:47 AM I sure would love to share that umbrella with you, Andrea!! You sure painted two types of friends so well here....me, I consider myself so blessed to have a true friend as you... sending you smiles and hugs :)

Joseph May May 29, 2013 at 4:08 PM great haiku...congrats on your win

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 3:28 PM Congrats on your win. AO

Donna Jones May 28, 2013 at 1:25 PM Ohhhhh..I like these Andrea...well done...congratulations

Bl Devnath May 28, 2013 at 10:39 AM Congratulation on your win, my sweet friend. Loved always,bl

Bukang Liwayway May 28, 2013 at 10:26 AM Congratulations on your win friend Andrea, I remember my friends when its raining because we used to play under the rain at the rooftop.. :) have a nice day. Hugs, Maria

Carrie Richards May 28, 2013 at 8:50 AM I love this Andrea. And closest to a true haiku as well !! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:06 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2013 at 1:16 AM Many congrats Andy love another stunner xx

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:16 PM Andrea. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:17 PM Andrea, your poem almost did not make the list... the title was tacky... lol... but was a great blog title... anyways, i hope you do not mind my honesty. CONGRATS

Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 12:07 PM Great one, Andrea. I liked how you stayed away from all the steam and slobber that we all incorporated in ours! ;) This is cute and lovely and full of warmth. Won't be surprised if you win the day with this! :)

Timothy Hicks May 27, 2013 at 10:14 AM I think this is one of my favorites so far for the contest... it feels more traditional to haiku was in the early days, and not so overly exaggerated in descriptive terms. A very adorable friendship... a real friend teases you and then soon make it up to you :)

Debbie Duncan May 27, 2013 at 12:53 AM Well I'll bet it wins ;} ,,, I have to post new poems,,,,After awhile crocodile ;}

Dom- X- May 26, 2013 at 8:10 PM pd will love this. DX

Robert Johnson May 26, 2013 at 3:07 PM Reconciliation, how lovely. :) Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2013 at 4:07 PM they are different friends. hahaha

Honestly J.T. May 26, 2013 at 12:18 PM I like this haiku - JH

Cecilia Macfarlane May 26, 2013 at 11:30 AM Awesome how you differentiated the distinction between selfish and true friends. great job! Hugs

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