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Two Kinds of Friends

leaving me quite drenched she has snatched my umbrella. . . the rainy day friend we are giggling under a shared umbrella. . . best friends forever for PD's Haiku Contest (Inspired by Picture #4 which was a quote about friendship)

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:43:00 AM

you are the sweetest

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/12/2013 9:51:00 PM

Sounds like they were having fun these rainy day friends. Nice one. love phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 6/5/2013 10:13:00 AM

Don't talk to me about rain. My asthma is terrible because of the humidity. You must be a true friend to put up with an umbrella snatcher. Love, daver

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/3/2013 1:16:00 PM

rainy day friend...HA! Love that, Andrea. I think I have some of those.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2013 3:42:00 PM

lol, hope you have more friends like the girl in the second haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2013 2:39:00 PM

Ahhh!! Congrats on your great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/30/2013 6:31:00 PM

Nicely set moment and captured so well. I really enjoy your poems.

Heather Ober

Date: 5/30/2013 5:39:00 PM

This is adorable!! What a sweet moment. To answer your question, the painting I chose for Isaiah's contest was not one of the paintings he included on his contest page. None of those "spoke" to me, so I googled George Dunlop Leslie and found one I liked :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2013 10:47:00 AM

I sure would love to share that umbrella with you, Andrea!! You sure painted two types of friends so well here....me, I consider myself so blessed to have a true friend as you... sending you smiles and hugs :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2013 4:08:00 PM

great haiku...congrats on your win

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 3:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win. AO

Donna Jones

Date: 5/28/2013 1:25:00 PM

Ohhhhh..I like these Andrea...well done...congratulations

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/28/2013 10:39:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, my sweet friend. Loved always,bl

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/28/2013 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win friend Andrea, I remember my friends when its raining because we used to play under the rain at the rooftop.. :) have a nice day. Hugs, Maria

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/28/2013 8:50:00 AM

I love this Andrea. And closest to a true haiku as well !! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2013 2:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/28/2013 1:16:00 AM

Many congrats Andy love another stunner xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2013 7:16:00 PM

Andrea. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/27/2013 7:17:00 PM

Andrea, your poem almost did not make the list... the title was tacky... lol... but was a great blog title... anyways, i hope you do not mind my honesty. CONGRATS

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/27/2013 12:07:00 PM

Great one, Andrea. I liked how you stayed away from all the steam and slobber that we all incorporated in ours! ;) This is cute and lovely and full of warmth. Won't be surprised if you win the day with this! :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/27/2013 10:14:00 AM

I think this is one of my favorites so far for the contest... it feels more traditional to haiku was in the early days, and not so overly exaggerated in descriptive terms. A very adorable friendship... a real friend teases you and then soon make it up to you :)