Two Joined Together

strawberries dovetailed in chocolate melt - - - crystalline diamond sparkles of heart’s cupidity. 2/12/2019

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 2/18/2019 4:21:00 PM

Beautiful words in interesting juxtaposition. Who would have thought of combining affairs of the heart with avarice. I can see how this works in two ways.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2019 5:54:00 AM

Thank you, Geoffrey!

Elaine George

Date: 2/16/2019 4:57:00 AM

A great Kimo, Kim. Thank you for sharing. Elaine

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2019 2:53:00 PM

Thank you, Elaine!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:11:00 PM

very cute. I just love that cupidity word.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2019 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/13/2019 11:56:00 AM

I loved reading this and wish I could eat it. All the best ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2019 2:43:00 PM

ohhh, beguiling.. i love the word' cupidity,' kim... indelible ink!.. thanks for appreciating my work... huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2019 8:49:00 PM

You’re welcome and thank you, Nette!