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Two Ice Cubes

Placed two ice cubes on a hill... Watched them glide as they will... The blissful ride took many turns... Dripping through a path of many yearns... Destination is a warm sweet place... Where raining flames kiss my face... Each cube melts in the oven of enticement... Where it can be tasted on lips with pure excitement...

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Karen Harris

Date: 2/19/2013 11:56:00 AM

I like this one too !

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/6/2013 6:28:00 PM

Nice to read your write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 12/23/2012 2:11:00 AM

love this image,truly sensual ..great write and congrad s on your win Mehnaz

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 9:59:00 PM

Michael, , congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2012 8:12:00 PM

wow :-) Michael..I'm gliding down the hill along with the melting image... hot hot... love it... always~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2012 6:22:00 PM

nicely done and nicely won, Michael. What a novel idea on the two ice cubes. I see you have your santa clause hat in the picture. ME LIKES.

David Williams

Date: 12/18/2012 11:38:00 AM

Michael congrats on your big win my friend, loved it first time around....David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/18/2012 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Santa xx

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/14/2012 8:20:00 AM

woow, beautifu lSanta Michael, my fav verse is "Where raining flames kiss my face..." so romantic! I have my good reading today, thank you for share Santa :D

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 12/14/2012 4:00:00 AM

oh i agree with catie...very sultry!! gets one's imagination going that is for sure lol....amazing what you can do with ice cubes hehehe.....Shaz

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/13/2012 9:51:00 AM

i'll never look at my ice cubs the same way again,, love this Michael, it's different, and a little hot...just love the last stanza

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/12/2012 8:52:00 PM

Hi Michael ...like your new look..ha ha and thank you for your ice cubes,,, enjoyed it much...nice day to you Santa...<3<3<3

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/12/2012 5:01:00 PM

Haha..very cute write :)

Cindy Cayton

Date: 12/12/2012 4:23:00 PM

perfect rythmatic flow! calculated almost...hahaha, take care and God bless, please check out the final masterpiece, will be gone the rest of the next couple months off the computer. and know that I appreciated your encouragement on the concrete poem of the rose, today the world was supposed to end? well, God said no, I guess... people trying to calculate, no wonder our country is in depth, wrote a new 1 today. Love ya Brother, Cindy

Cindy Cayton
Date: 12/12/2012 4:25:00 PM

debt=depth, oops and I revised the rose into a rose in a vase on a table..... :) :) :) :) :) :) and many, many more!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/12/2012 2:57:00 PM

This is my very first ice cube poem, Michael...wow,...what great ideas u have elaborated on...is there nothing u can't write about???....Fun. U wear Santa's hat nicely!! Gotta get myself one of those! :)

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2012 2:16:00 PM

soup mail...

Len Gasun

Date: 12/12/2012 10:16:00 AM

Another outstanding couplet which i enjoyed reading my dear friend, Michael! Thank you so much for sharing and again for you kind visit! More power and blessings! love and hugs, Leonora

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 12/12/2012 9:13:00 AM

Wow, this is an awesome write..the imagery is really good here. But, of course you know your work is outstanding!! :) I love ""raining flames kiss my face." enjoyed Michael! Anytime I see passion, love or anything in that genre, its a must read for me. Thanks again!

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2012 7:07:00 AM

hey Michael send me some of those rocks would you buddy, love it...Dave

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/12/2012 6:59:00 AM

I loved this incredible write my friend! I absolutely enjoyed reading this harmonious and dynamic poem here this morning! You have brought a smile to my face with your piece Michael, thank you for showering me with your words! btw, I love your Santa hat! Great Work!!