Two Ice Cubes

Placed two ice cubes on a hill...
Watched them glide as they will...

The blissful ride took many turns...
Dripping through a path of many yearns...
 
Destination is a warm sweet place...
Where raining flames kiss my face...

Each cube melts in the oven of enticement...
Where it can be tasted on lips with pure excitement...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harris Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 11:56 AM
I like this one too !
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Nice to read your write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Veetil Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 2:11 AM
love this image,truly sensual ..great write and congrad s on your win Mehnaz
A   Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 9:59 PM
Michael, , congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
A   Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 8:12 PM
wow :-) Michael..I'm gliding down the hill along with the melting image... hot hot... love it... always~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 6:22 PM
nicely done and nicely won, Michael. What a novel idea on the two ice cubes. I see you have your santa clause hat in the picture. ME LIKES.
Williams Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Michael congrats on your big win my friend, loved it first time around....David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 1:54 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Santa xx
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:20 AM
woow, beautifu lSanta Michael, my fav verse is "Where raining flames kiss my face..." so romantic! I have my good reading today, thank you for share Santa :D
Cheesman Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 4:00 AM
oh i agree with catie...very sultry!! gets one's imagination going that is for sure lol....amazing what you can do with ice cubes hehehe.....Shaz
Horsman Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:51 AM
i'll never look at my ice cubs the same way again,, love this Michael, it's different, and a little hot...just love the last stanza
Komala Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Hi Michael ...like your new look..ha ha and thank you for your ice cubes,,, enjoyed it much...nice day to you Santa...<3<3<3
Singleton Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Haha..very cute write :)
Cayton Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 4:23 PM
perfect rythmatic flow! calculated almost...hahaha, take care and God bless, please check out the final masterpiece, will be gone the rest of the next couple months off the computer. and know that I appreciated your encouragement on the concrete poem of the rose, today the world was supposed to end? well, God said no, I guess... people trying to calculate, no wonder our country is in depth, wrote a new 1 today. Love ya Brother, Cindy
Cayton Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 4:25 PM
debt=depth, oops and I revised the rose into a rose in a vase on a table..... :) :) :) :) :) :) and many, many more!
Song Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 2:57 PM
This is my very first ice cube poem, Michael...wow,...what great ideas u have elaborated on...is there nothing u can't write about???....Fun. U wear Santa's hat nicely!! Gotta get myself one of those! :)
Williams Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 2:16 PM
soup mail...
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:16 AM
Another outstanding couplet which i enjoyed reading my dear friend, Michael! Thank you so much for sharing and again for you kind visit! More power and blessings! love and hugs, Leonora
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December 12, 2012 at 9:13 AM
Wow, this is an awesome write..the imagery is really good here. But, of course you know your work is outstanding!! :) I love ""raining flames kiss my face." enjoyed Michael! Anytime I see passion, love or anything in that genre, its a must read for me. Thanks again!
Williams Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 7:07 AM
hey Michael send me some of those rocks would you buddy, love it...Dave
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December 12, 2012 at 6:59 AM
I loved this incredible write my friend! I absolutely enjoyed reading this harmonious and dynamic poem here this morning! You have brought a smile to my face with your piece Michael, thank you for showering me with your words! btw, I love your Santa hat! Great Work!!
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