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Two Hearts as Old Friends What Might Have Been

Two friends they thought it would never end,

They just wanted their love to blend,

Friends and lovers what can you say?

Your words take my breath away.

 

Their life was in each other’s heart.

How would they ever know it was a dart,

 A dart that would kill their love.

Just like a dying dove.

 

There was no more love flying,

Just more and more crying,

Now we are apart,

Like we were from the start,

 

Now we cry for each the other,

Like we did when we needed our mother.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/11/2019 7:36:00 PM
Well written and enjoyable also very relatable
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank You, for reading & writing. Glad you like it...
Date: 7/17/2019 12:40:00 AM
This is deep. Beautiful write :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2019 11:17:00 AM
Glad you like it. Thank You...
Date: 7/3/2019 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful and sad at the same time. Beautifully written Paula. I love this line: "Their life was in each other’s heart. How would they ever know it was a dart, A dart that would kill their love. Just like a dying dove." I love the whole poem. The best so far. x
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2019 6:49:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it. Thank You, for your encouraging note.
Date: 6/26/2019 8:18:00 PM
Loss, always so painful. Great job! Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2019 3:03:00 PM
So True.....I found this note from you. Thank You.