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Two Hearts

Mom
And I
Together
The comforting
Rythmic beating of
Her heart touching my own
How precious she is to me
Loving companions in this life
There is no closer bond than we two
Would a Mother Betray her own Baby?

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Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2010 at 4:40 PM

I like when you approach the topic in this way. Very gently told, very nice to read!! LUv, Andrea

David Byrne

February 9, 2010 at 9:50 AM

Nicely written!

Daver Austin

February 9, 2010 at 7:47 AM

"Would a Mother Betray her own Baby?" Considering the first nine lines, I'd have to say (romantically) no. With drugs it might be different. For sure, I like your blending, your crescendo into the last line. Love, daver

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 7, 2010 at 5:19 PM

Dear Robert, I agree with Linda-Marie YOU write with such Compassion Superb Write As for the last line ( for me the answer is YES) I doubt a Mother receiving so much LOVE from her "Baby" Could ever Betray Him ALWAYS YOUR POETIC Friend...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2010 at 6:40 PM

So utterly beautiful and grand .. a lovely title with sentiments to match.. precious poetry Robert... thankxxx for your wonderful comments tonight... trying my hand at mostly every contest being offered... appreciate your input on my writings... luv.. Linda-Marie..