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Two Heads of Janus

Blessed with two heads
Welcoming new aims to view
Review-renew old

Quietness all around
Secret actions in full swing
Impregnating soil.

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May 7, 2014
Form: Haiku
Dr. Ram Mehta
Fifth Place win
Contest: Two haiku on January by Irma, Skat-A

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Skat A Date: 5/23/2015 11:10:00 AM INTERESTING Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/8/2014 11:34:00 PM Wonderfully altogether differently done Dr Ram ! Congrats on win ! Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/8/2014 9:47:00 PM Congratulations Dr. Ram on fine win. Unique and different from other Haikus in the contest. Mohan Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/8/2014 5:44:00 PM Congratulations, pd Login to Reply

A.E. Rivenbark Date: 6/8/2014 5:17:00 PM Yes! I love this, love, love mythology and this a great take on Janus. Congrats on your win :D Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/8/2014 1:59:00 PM Two strong haiku, Dr! maybe the second slightly better than the first. Congrats on your win. // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/8/2014 12:48:00 PM Congrats on your win Dr Ram Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/8/2014 10:24:00 AM Congratulations on another fine win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2014 10:22:00 AM I seem to be liking mostly the second haiku in the ones that are pairs. Yours too. It's very deep with meaning. Congrats for win. Login to Reply

Theresa Stephens Date: 6/8/2014 9:17:00 AM Hi Dr Ram, Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed reading your poems. Poetic ' food for thought ' indeed. All the best Theresa xx Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/8/2014 8:35:00 AM DR........ :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Login to Reply Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/8/2014 9:38:00 AM Thanks, Skat, for the appreciation

Roy Jerden Date: 5/29/2014 12:06:00 PM Interesting pair of haikus as the second one appears to serve as the juxtaposition to the first and the space between them serves as the kireji, hence rather than two haikus, it is one 6 line haiku. Cheers, Roy Login to Reply

Deborah Shiells Date: 5/13/2014 6:03:00 PM Hi Dr.Ram, I really enjoyed this excellent poem. Best of best to you and thank you for sharing this write With us here. Thank you for your well wishes on my featured write. Love and Peace, Deborah Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 5/10/2014 6:52:00 PM Deep but well worth the read, love the second part the best great job, take care glad I read this today. cheri Login to Reply

Jake Ponce Date: 5/9/2014 8:39:00 PM I like your haiku, Dr. Ram! Correct me if I'm wrong but the way I see it, instead of the cold stillness, you've chosen to portray creation and life for the January Haikus contest. :) Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 5/9/2014 11:12:00 AM Love your birth of spring. Love, daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/8/2014 9:41:00 PM very nice, I especially liked the second one, Dr. Ram. Login to Reply