Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Haiku

Two Heads of Janus

Blessed with two heads
Welcoming new aims to view
Review-renew old

Quietness all around
Secret actions in full swing
Impregnating soil.

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May 7, 2014
Form: Haiku
Dr. Ram Mehta
Fifth Place win
Contest: Two haiku on January by Irma, Skat-A

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Skat A May 23, 2015 at 11:10 AM INTERESTING

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 8, 2014 at 11:34 PM Wonderfully altogether differently done Dr Ram ! Congrats on win !

Mohan Chutani June 8, 2014 at 9:47 PM Congratulations Dr. Ram on fine win. Unique and different from other Haikus in the contest. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:44 PM Congratulations, pd

A.E. Rivenbark June 8, 2014 at 5:17 PM Yes! I love this, love, love mythology and this a great take on Janus. Congrats on your win :D

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 1:59 PM Two strong haiku, Dr! maybe the second slightly better than the first. Congrats on your win. // paul

Joseph May June 8, 2014 at 12:48 PM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 10:24 AM Congratulations on another fine win!

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 10:22 AM I seem to be liking mostly the second haiku in the ones that are pairs. Yours too. It's very deep with meaning. Congrats for win.

Theresa Stephens June 8, 2014 at 9:17 AM Hi Dr Ram, Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed reading your poems. Poetic ' food for thought ' indeed. All the best Theresa xx

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:35 AM DR........ :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 9:38 AM Thanks, Skat, for the appreciation

Roy Jerden May 29, 2014 at 12:06 PM Interesting pair of haikus as the second one appears to serve as the juxtaposition to the first and the space between them serves as the kireji, hence rather than two haikus, it is one 6 line haiku. Cheers, Roy

Deborah Shiells May 13, 2014 at 6:03 PM Hi Dr.Ram, I really enjoyed this excellent poem. Best of best to you and thank you for sharing this write With us here. Thank you for your well wishes on my featured write. Love and Peace, Deborah

Cherl Dunn May 10, 2014 at 6:52 PM Deep but well worth the read, love the second part the best great job, take care glad I read this today. cheri

Jake Ponce May 9, 2014 at 8:39 PM I like your haiku, Dr. Ram! Correct me if I'm wrong but the way I see it, instead of the cold stillness, you've chosen to portray creation and life for the January Haikus contest. :)

Daver Austin May 9, 2014 at 11:12 AM Love your birth of spring. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2014 at 9:41 PM very nice, I especially liked the second one, Dr. Ram.