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Two Headed Turtle

A two headed turtle in a bed blue Slept whole night through close to his brother too
Contest: Two Timer's Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Now this is exciting, I love this so much. Thanks Sara. :-)
Guzzi Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Very clever how you used all the 2's yet this simply discribed the picture Sara and it was not my intent to chain you in at all..no need to work off the picture or to use more than 1 of the 2's sorry I was unclear. I wanted you to have the freedom to write any 2 lined forms [hopefully one you hadn't tried before] the only rule being the use of 1 word [to] or [too] or [two] Light & Love
Kovrlija Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Creative and interesting, as usual.
Palmer Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 11:48 AM
wonderful write Sara,best wishes
Robillard Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Such a creative poem! Good luck! :)
Horsman Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 7:17 AM
cannot get much closer than that, Sara, what a wonderful two liner, awesome....
Wesley Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 8:20 PM
So cool Sara; your to's are all in the right place and the subject is a head turner. All the best in the contest. Love Lizzie
Gasun Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:39 PM
This is a very fascinating couplet which I enjoy reading it today, Sara. Good luck in the contest! love/hugs:) Leonora
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 6:13 PM
originality at its best, sara... a finly written piece for debbie.. winning success and huggs!..:)
Sivey Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 3:10 PM
I just love this humorous write my friend! This is a tremendous and glorious poem Sara! I really enjoyed your wonderful piece that you have written here. This is a cute write with a two headed little turtle, awwww! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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