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Two parts lowered in a boundless ocean of fierce passion. Two slices run across to frame a conspicuous association. There wasn't a unique heart in this graceful world, at any rate. Willingly, he was part of a pair, and the other is his soulmate. He realistically was nearby a half-lost from his original half. Until you mildly strike each other under moon glow gaff. Learn of those who cope with the ill issues of proper reverence! Two halves come together, despite the sizeable distance.
Written: January 21, 2022

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Date: 1/21/2022 7:19:00 PM
No one is complete unless he/she meets the other half ! The right match when put into a single frame makes the picture complete. A very meaningful and beautiful composition, Lasaad...
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Date: 1/21/2022 1:40:00 PM
Your final stanza provides us with a bright answer.
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Date: 1/21/2022 9:34:00 AM
Your poem says much about the eternal destiny of "two halves," Lasaad. I suspect you have articulated great truth in these couplets. Good stuff, my friend.
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Date: 1/21/2022 7:48:00 AM
Lasaad, The distance written in 'Two halves', perfect for forming the truest of bridges. -Richard
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