Kiran Bantawa Poet Haiku

Two Haiku In January

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#1

Hailstones pour -

other side of the leaf

saving himself a spider  .



#2

Draped in snow  -

steamy breath when sun kisses 

the rock statue is alive  .

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Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:51 PM Sweet win..pd

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 2:40 PM Good presentation and creativity. Congrats. // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 11:00 AM these make us stop and think from the unique pictures you have created. VERY well done Congrats on HM.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 10:04 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Kiran

Barbara Gorelick June 8, 2014 at 9:27 AM LOve the spider bit.. congrats on your win. BG

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:40 AM KIRAN :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2014 at 10:03 PM Ok, No Problem

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 8:02 PM Kiran, thank you for commenting my comment....PDA Kiran Bantawa May 25, 2014 at 9:58 PM you are welcome!

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 1:38 PM Kiran, awesome set of haiku...Linda Kiran Bantawa May 22, 2014 at 2:25 PM Thanks PDA!

Nathan D. May 21, 2014 at 11:02 AM great haikus Kiran Bantawa May 22, 2014 at 2:25 PM thanks Nathan!

Gwendolen Song May 21, 2014 at 9:17 AM strong personification on that first half...thoroughly enjoyed the leaf's survivalist skills! Adorable. Kiran Bantawa May 22, 2014 at 2:24 PM Thanks G. R.