Two Friends and a Puppy------Childrens Poem Story

This is a children's book I want to get published with some cute colorful
pictures.  Please let me know what you think and any suggestions.  Thanks


Crinkle was a little cloud
That lived in a fluffy town
Full of smiles, joy and laughter
 Fun times always shared together
In the city and park slides
The towns love was miles wide
Crinkle has a friend named Buddy
When it rains they get all muddy
Crinkle called Buddy one day
To have a picnic and some play
They walked into the sunny park
When they heard a little bark
They listened very carefully 
And found a puppy near a tree
With brown fur and big green eyes
The puppy jumped up with surprise
Into the arms of little Crinkle
The puppies face had cute small dimples
The two friends did not know
What to do or who to show
So they took their new friend home
Where she wouldn’t be alone
Giving her hugs right from the start
To show the love inside their heart
For this little fun new friend
Never letting good times end
Chasing frisbees, sticks and balls
And silly shadows on the wall
The little puppy looked so fancy
The two friends thought and called her Clancy
Each day Crinkle and Buddy  too
Taught Clancy a trick or two
Sitting up and rolling over
In warm green fields of clover
Balancing while jumping up
For a toy inside a cup
Dancing and prancing around
For the people in cloud town
Showing off and having fun
Until the moon blocks out the sun
While Clancy rested in her bed
Till the sun woke up again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 5:00 AM
a delightful story Robin congrats on placing hugs
That Archaic Poet Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 11:50 AM
So cute! I bet you would make a great children's author; you have such a sweet and kind demeanor that I think kids would instantly relate to. This is perfect for that age group. Great job, Sweet Pea <3
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 2:46 AM
this was very sweet. I am sure a small child would enjoy hearing it read to them. With those nice pictures to go along with it!! I sure do wonder how to break into that industry of children books!!
Smith Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 6:50 AM
I really enjoyed it...If you wanted to teach a lesson you could add about the person who lost a puppy ...The way you did it was great..just a different take
Pettit Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 11:28 PM
A darling little write that reminds me of a dog I used to have several years ago.
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