Two Friends

There was a kangaroo named Dudu
who met a cat one day named Susu
the kangaroo was rich with lots of toys
Susu was poor all she had was love
Dudu said to Susu I'll share my toys
if I can get from you a bit of love
deal was made Dudu got a little love
smiling shared with Susu all of his toys
Dudu and Susu with a lot of love
gladly played together with lots of toys
when playtime was all over the two friends
shook hands and arm in arm off they went...


This poem has music to it and it came to me in a dream. This is the first poem I ever wrote and without any effort!

Second Place Winner-Eve Roper: Children Sing To Rhyme Contest-4/7/23
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George   Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 1:13 PM
You have taught one of life's most value lessons in this delightful rhyme. Thank you for sharing, dear Frances. Elaine
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 2:30 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Frances -
Gasun Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 9:41 PM
Wow! I love this a lot. This is such a beautiful and interesting nursery rhyme poem sotry and song for children my dear poet friend. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win and for the very wonderful first poem on PS! HOpe you can share its melody too. Thanks a lot for sharing. Warm welcome to PS. Hope to read more from you. Hugs
Schiavina Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 10:33 AM
If I knew how, I happily share the melody of Two Friends and also Walk With Me which I heard Angels sing in my dream, also posted on Poetry Soup. Thank you Len for the heart warming comment which filled me with happiness.
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 5:16 PM
Frances, congratulations on your win on your poem, “Two Friends". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve
Nice friendship.... Well done
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