Two Fiqures By a Fountain

two fiqures by a fountain
love embraced by them
some much emotion
so lost for words
beauty so vivid
love is so powerful
we die when it is lost
but for now we must
look at the example
of beautiful love
two fiqures by a fountain




Inspired by the movie Atonement.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 3:39 PM
Lovely, lovely poem Autumn>>James
Sheart Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 1:11 PM
A beautiful write. It feels like those figures will be enjoyed by many onlookers with great feeling for many years to come. I can almost see them as the water sprays around them. Enjoyed. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 21, 2009 at 1:09 PM
nicely penned, thanks for sharing
Knop Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Nicely written poem, a hearty tribute to feelings! Thanks for your comment on "Out of the Blue". Pls comment also my poem "So far". Gert
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