Two English Sonnets

When a Man Loves a Woman


When a man loves a woman,  he believes
And frees his heart from being self-contained
To feel emotions in depth he conceives
With a lover's rush quietly restrained
In lonely corners of his soul's desire
He'll free the guarded wings of his heart
To allow them to soar ever higher
With a love that he hopes will never part
He'll dream of mornings with her fragrant scent
And want for evenings walked in shadowed light
To hold her close with her lover's consent
And feel warmth and comfort through every night

  To find a love for a soul to capture
  To know each tender touch from love's rapture

When a Woman Loves a Man


When a woman loves a man,  she will give
And trust her impulse is correct and true
For to love will allow her heart to live
And will chase away fear and doubt in view
The lover she chooses is now her dream
And fulfills a need of her heart's concern
To gather in her arms a love that's supreme
And hold ever tighter as their days turn
She'll yearn for time to be an endless thread
Woven into moments of love that's pure
To travel love's path with their arms outspread
And capture each days laughter's soft allure

  To see her love with deep passionate eyes
  And find her love filled with sweet joy and sighs

12/6/16
Contest Two English Sonnets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 3:40 PM
I have always loved your beautifully flowing sonnets Frederic and aspire to write them as well as you do :-) Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
Lindley Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 10:33 AM
What an amazing poem for me to find first thing to read this bright morn. A double that far exceeds a triple in my opinion. Adding to my fav list as this hits the mark in every way. I NOW SEE THAT IT ALSO WON IN A CONTEST, CONGRATS!
Pett Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Two marvellous sonnets, congratulations, Well deserved 1st place.
White Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Coming back with congratulations for you :)
White Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Wonderful sonnets for the contest. And I agree with Jan, I heard that song too in my head :) Good luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:31 PM
very beautiful writing. I fear mine will not be as romantic sounding when I try it!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Looks like you beat me to this challenge. Let me read what you came up with!
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 5:25 PM
I hear Percy Sledge's lyrics in my head too Frederic - two beautiful sonnets:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Turner Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Every time I started to write, I couldn't get past Percy Sledge. Great job, Frederic. Should have been a premier contest!
Parker Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:22 PM
yes I know..I had the same problem
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:02 PM
- Frederic, I hardly know what to say .... the first word I can find is : FANTASTIC ! ! ! - I love it :) - A big 7 - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:21 PM
thank you sunshine for your kindness
Onclaud Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 1:01 PM
the language of reciprocity so radiantly expressed through your charming sonnets... a poetic feat, frederick; wow!..huggs
Parker Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Thank you nette, you are kind
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