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Two English Sonnets

When a Woman Loves A Man She said,"Mama, how can I know true love Instead of just another passing thing?" Mama smiled,said,"That comes from up above! God makes it clear when it's not just a fling. "The sky will be bluer, bluer by far - Birds wil sing as if they are happier And you will be thrilled to be who you are, Your walk and talk will both be snappier. "He will look at you with love in his eyes, And smile to know you will belong to him. That is how you will know you have been wise, And this is true love and not just a whim. "As with all men, he will have to change some, But you can do that and the changes will come!" 12/5/16 When a Man Loves A Woman The boy said,"Daddy, can I really know If it's love with my girl or somethin' else?" The old man chuckled, "I can tell you so. Are you trying to please her or yourself?" "Love has two sides, practical and romance. Look to the practical to know it's real, The other stuff just proves that you can dance. The practical things you can see, not just feel." "They are toilet seats, pickup trucks, and boots. Put down the first and shine the other two. That goes against a man's instincts and roots, And proves you're thinkin' of her and not you." "So to know if it's love or just a treat See what you do with the toilet seat!" 12/5/16

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Date: 1/8/2017 3:49:00 PM
Your humour especially in the 2nd poem really made me smile and I love the way you wrote it as a conversation between parent and child :-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/8/2017 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, and congrats on your win, also. You are a very talented lady!..Larry
Date: 1/8/2017 8:09:00 AM
Wonderful sonnets! Congratulations :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/8/2017 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Darren...I enjoyed yours as well..Larry
Date: 12/6/2016 6:26:00 AM
The woman's view is more romantic, whilst the men are downright practical, no wonder they say we're from different planets! I don't know about 'change' though, that's usually what starts pandemonium in the first place. Truly enjoyable sonnets Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/6/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Paloma P..always appreciated. Someday you'll have to tell me your background..you're way out of my league!..Larry

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