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Two Dozen Pink and White

A mystery that kept me anxious, a secret with one small hint. You kept me guessing and you never gave in, even when I tried to pry and bribe. Two dozen pink and white beautiful, soft and fresh roses. I freed them from their cardboard dungeon, and buried my nose in those pink-tipped petals. This mystery that kept me anxious was well worth the anticipation and wait. With my face buried in pink and white softness, I was on my tip-toes, headed to heaven. Two dozen pink and white beautiful, soft and fresh roses. I can't stop smiling, Romeo, you've made my day, and you got me thinking and day-dreaming in depth. Your mystery, your surprise, your thoughts show you care. When the time comes and you're near, I wnat to show you what you're beginning to mean to Me!!!! (JSA>> You're something more than ever before.......)

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Date: 5/6/2009 7:31:00 AM
From a cheerful mood comes a delicious poem ... good treatment of the subject ... nice touch of imagination and seduction: With my face buried in pink and white softness, love always
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Date: 5/5/2009 8:27:00 AM
This is sweet and sensitive, very feminine. Do a lot of commenting. Folks will gradually pick up on your stuff. Keep posting. Be patient. Love, daver
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