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Two Doves: a 55 word story

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A widower once had a spring visitor, a dove with no mate. It roosted in a tree near where the old man often sat. It cooed to him. One day the man's daughter looked for him, he was gone. She was startled by the sudden flight of two doves. The old man was never found.

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Date: 2/23/2024 4:34:00 PM
It seems like a poem about a dream coming true. Short and complete!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/23/2024 4:51:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/22/2024 2:28:00 PM
mysterious and a tad eerie, like something from Twilight Zone. Clever, though.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/23/2024 4:50:00 PM
Thank you.

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