two doves

two fat mourning doves 
 visited bird feeders....
now one lonely bird

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Sam Kauffman

January 12, 2026 at 1:45 PM

Such a sad ending line, Sara! Wonderfully composed haiku that delivers a mournful gut punch! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2026 at 4:30 PM

Why, thank you, Sam. I appreciate the visit and understanding comments. Sara K

Howard Kerr

January 12, 2026 at 5:23 AM

Hello Sarah, I simply adore this clever and insightful haiku. Each line a logical step stone to a challenging conclusion. Once again many thanks for your visits to my poetry page,, Howard

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2026 at 10:18 AM

Yes, a logical steppingstone. I am delighted you found it clever. Sara K

Valsa George

January 11, 2026 at 5:59 AM

Dear Sara, Beautiful haiku. I have the nest of these grey doves in the roof of my house. There is a pool below, in my courtyard. They come everyday to drink water especially in summer. Sorry, l couldn' t respond to your poems as l have taken a break being busy with my son's marriage.

Sara Kendrick

January 11, 2026 at 8:58 AM

Valsa, weddings do take a lot of planning, hard work and physical stamina. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Glad that you have doves in your area as well. Sara K