Two Dementia Patients Share the Memory of Water

Two glasses of water
wait to be touched by hands and lips.

The water itself remembers the taste 
of Fixodent, the salty funk
of being swallowed into a body
so blind to itself
that thoughts have dimmed to patches
of slowly shuttering lights.
It is then that the water is their memory
it is then that the water can drink them.

The water also drinks
parents, grandparents,
multiple layers of children,
but only in parts, only in shallows
and shadows.

Two Alzheimer patients
look upon each other.
both reach for a glass of water at once.
Now the water
can fill-in, recall and paint mind pictures.

They begin to talk about people 
that they both remember
as if the past was always
just one shared glass of water.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 12:43 AM
Wow - great perspective. Enjoyed this.
Ashford Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Many thanks Line G!
Amadore Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 12:49 PM
What an interesting poem/concept....for those of us who have had only occasional contacts with victims of dementia (and, perhaps, Alzheimer's), the crucial recognition of even so basic/essential a thing as water and that spark of recognition serving as an initiation of further realizations by those affected is a fascinating concept. Kudos.
Ashford Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Hi Leo, thanks for this close read and positive review. Much obliged.
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