S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Shape

Two Delhi Monuments

KUTUB MINAR

               A
             Line
           Upright
           Reminds
           A slave
           A  king
           A court
           Witness
           Intrigues
           Pitying
           Avariced
           Thrusts
           Miseried
           Minions
           Staring
           Baring
           Nothing

  Form: Shape    
             

              LOTUS TEMPLE 

                  Peacock
            Park.Touching turf.
       Gem afloat  flowing  grace
    A pinnacle. Where is the prince.
 Claustrophobic confines open out now
Opened up. What vibrant white trance.
           I turn a clairvoyant
             I’m everywhere
              Peace, peace

Form: Rictameter

For Catie Lindsey's contest.

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Afolabi Muideen June 7, 2015 at 1:52 PM Interesting and enjoyable piece,peace is every that is true well penned Jag......A.M.

Nikhil Sati June 6, 2015 at 6:39 AM live in India still haven't seen them. This enchanted me to view them.........!! i like it...............!!

Nikhil Sati June 6, 2015 at 6:37 AM live india still haven't seen the. this enchanted me to view them.........!! i like it...............!!

Cyndi Macmillan May 30, 2015 at 9:17 AM Hi, Jag. Enjoyed both but the Lotus Temple really moved me... I think because you are so entrenched in the poem and I have had moments like these as well. Your readers can easily identify with the emotion you captured so well. Clairvoyant, yes, resonates! I hope you are well and that you have found relief from the heat wave that is causing such suffering in your country. You are in my thoughts and prayers. I read that a monsoon will help-- but not all areas. Praying for YOU...& your family

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2015 at 11:09 AM astounding verse on the power of peace.. nice to read you again, jag!.. huggs

Afolabi Muideen May 22, 2015 at 4:47 AM Excellent write, it is true peace is every were..............Afolabi.