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Two Delhi Monuments

KUTUB MINAR A Line Upright Reminds A slave A king A court Witness Intrigues Pitying Avariced Thrusts Miseried Minions Staring Baring Nothing Form: Shape LOTUS TEMPLE Peacock Park.Touching turf. Gem afloat flowing grace A pinnacle. Where is the prince. Claustrophobic confines open out now Opened up. What vibrant white trance. I turn a clairvoyant I’m everywhere Peace, peace Form: Rictameter For Catie Lindsey's contest.

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/7/2015 1:52:00 PM

Interesting and enjoyable piece,peace is every that is true well penned Jag......A.M.

Nikhil Sati

Date: 6/6/2015 6:39:00 AM

live in India still haven't seen them. This enchanted me to view them.........!! i like it...............!!

Nikhil Sati

Date: 6/6/2015 6:37:00 AM

live india still haven't seen the. this enchanted me to view them.........!! i like it...............!!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/30/2015 9:17:00 AM

Hi, Jag. Enjoyed both but the Lotus Temple really moved me... I think because you are so entrenched in the poem and I have had moments like these as well. Your readers can easily identify with the emotion you captured so well. Clairvoyant, yes, resonates! I hope you are well and that you have found relief from the heat wave that is causing such suffering in your country. You are in my thoughts and prayers. I read that a monsoon will help-- but not all areas. Praying for YOU...& your family

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2015 11:09:00 AM

astounding verse on the power of peace.. nice to read you again, jag!.. huggs

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/22/2015 4:47:00 AM

Excellent write, it is true peace is every were..............Afolabi.