Two Dazzling Crowns

Put to rout Darkness' hounds
    Invite Heaven's Light to shine on down

  Kind words and deeds all year 'round
    On your head two dazzling crowns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 11:04 PM
Yes Sir our good deeds will bring us crowns If I get any I hope they don't look like the Burger King ones. lovely thoughts my friend...
Hawkins Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Kind words, indeed, Are what we need. Thank you, Gershon for yours. Take care, Shirley
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:01 PM
Glad to oblige, Shirley. Keep smiling, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Nice thoughts!
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Nice comment! ~ gw
Romios Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Beautiful couplets, Pangie. Xx
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Byootiful comment. Thanks, P!
Sands Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Very nice Gershon. You are shining :)
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 8:12 PM
If I am shining, then you are VERY nice, Heidi. Thank you so much. :) gw
George Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 11:27 PM
Beautifully put ! Your wise words shine like sparkling crowns. :)
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