Two Cinquains

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The Note Compost Bin held the note Written in poetic form Love poured out upon the blank page Decayed Written by: Sara Kendrick March 06, 2016 Form: Cinquain The Bus Depot Grey Hound Waits for no one A rented box contains Smart phone, credit cards, love poem Transport

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2016 3:59:00 AM

- Skilled and impressive, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2016 4:04:00 PM

these are very interesting, sara. I think you are really liking this form lately. And I like seeing you write it!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 5:40:00 PM

Thanks for the generous comments..I appreciate you stopping by..I do like the Cinqains but I think they are works with lots of poetic license..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2016 10:09:00 AM

Never written in this form, Sara. The brevity adds weight to the words and images that you portray. Very intriguing write....That first one got to me...especially...that analogy in the last line. Hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 1:36:00 PM

Yes, love can shrink and decay like the compost.. thanks for dropping by..Sara