Sara Kendrick Poet Cinquain

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Two Cinquains

 The Note

Compost
Bin held the note
Written in poetic form
Love poured out upon the blank page
Decayed

Written by: Sara Kendrick
March 06, 2016
Form: Cinquain

The  Bus Depot

Grey Hound
Waits for no one
A rented box contains
Smart phone, credit cards, love poem
Transport
 

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2016 at 3:59 AM - Skilled and impressive, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2016 at 4:04 PM these are very interesting, sara. I think you are really liking this form lately. And I like seeing you write it!! Sara Kendrick March 7, 2016 at 5:40 PM Thanks for the generous comments..I appreciate you stopping by..I do like the Cinqains but I think they are works with lots of poetic license..Sara

Eileen Manassian March 7, 2016 at 10:09 AM Never written in this form, Sara. The brevity adds weight to the words and images that you portray. Very intriguing write....That first one got to me...especially...that analogy in the last line. Hugs Sara Kendrick March 7, 2016 at 1:36 PM Yes, love can shrink and decay like the compost.. thanks for dropping by..Sara