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From 2009 when son Jeremy graduated law school. Angela, his sister, is three years older.

I only know how to get my pictures from FB, so this is sure to go off soon. I can't get my FB pictures to stay up. Does anyone know why that is?

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Two Children

My girl
as precious as
a pearl

My son
who is second
to none

They are
each one of them
a star!

April 11, 2020
for Joseph May's Finding Your Musette Poetry Contest

childrenrhyme

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 4/18/2020 11:38:00 AM

I love children.............I love this poem as a "unique" interpretation! Love it Andrea.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/18/2020 11:06:00 AM

Wow, what a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing your family. Blessings And Congrats.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/16/2020 6:57:00 PM

Very moving and sweet--CONGRATS, Andrea. Janice

Curtis Johnson

Date: 4/16/2020 1:43:00 PM

Andrea, this is so special. Congrats are due and placements are fine, but this stands apart and tall as a treasured piece. Much love to you and your family. Curtis.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/16/2020 6:32:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... letting us know you more through your poem. The Lord has blessed you with your "stars." God bless you more.

Joseph May

Date: 4/15/2020 7:08:00 PM

Two precious gems, Congrats on your win Andrea..

Judy Ball

Date: 4/14/2020 4:21:00 PM

Love it. Super write. Would make a great valentine card for both of them with picture included. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/14/2020 4:31:00 PM

what a neat idea, but my son is not so sentimental. He might toss it. haha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2020 7:24:00 PM

Sweetness! Much success to both!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/13/2020 12:19:00 PM

A mother's love shines, so does your lovely write. Hugs

John Watt

Date: 4/12/2020 10:51:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your family with us. Beautiful pic and lovely concise words to describe them. I like My son who is second (to none)... very clever. Great write and GL!

JCB Brul

Date: 4/12/2020 9:29:00 PM

Lucky is a parent who possesses such treasures! Great poem!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/12/2020 2:44:00 PM

You did them proud! Aloha! Rico

Silent One

Date: 4/12/2020 2:00:00 PM

This is lovely...

Kash Poet

Date: 4/12/2020 1:50:00 PM

Simple yet beautiful! Lovely photo.Best wishes.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/12/2020 9:35:00 AM

Lovely family you have there, Andrea, and the poetry, Stay safe,,Harry

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/12/2020 6:46:00 AM

A prayer for a Happy Easter full of health and love is being sent to you dear poet. Thank you for your poetry, Andrea Always, xo

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/12/2020 12:40:00 AM

Andrea, My lord souls have past ,,no matter, this should find you proud. I know I would be. -Richard

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/11/2020 11:02:00 PM

So simple, but sweet..Happy Easter..

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/11/2020 9:58:00 PM

wonderful picture and poem, children are always stars and shine equally in a mother's eyes... :) Happy Easter … hugs and blessings

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/11/2020 9:56:00 PM

Awww, I love this photo of your children Andrea and your poem too! Your pretty daughter looks so much like you. Your son looks so scholarly and dashing in his graduation cap and gown. Thank you for sharing this. Have a beautiful Easter my friend! xxoo

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/12/2020 5:24:00 PM

thanks, Connie.

Mark Koplin

Date: 4/11/2020 3:41:00 PM

A very beautiful poem for a beautiful family. Very sweet and a great write. Thanks for sharing. I haven't had trouble with pictures but I would maybe contact admin, they might have an idea. Happy Easter!