Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Two Cardinals Come

two cardinals come
male~female at the feeder...
male gives female food

kisses mixed with seed
male proves his trustworthiness...
more romance follows 

Sponsor:Poetess Darkly
Contest: A Kiss Is Just A Kiss
Written This Twenty-Fifth Day Of July 2013

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Mustapha Mohammed August 29, 2013 at 8:08 AM Lovely Haiku dear Sara. Well done my friend.

Poet Destroyer A August 11, 2013 at 7:16 AM Hello Sara, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 11:19 AM nice hauki Sara congrats on being featured shadow smiles

Daver Austin August 6, 2013 at 10:05 AM We have a pair visiting all year long in our back yard. Enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Milton Toran August 5, 2013 at 9:13 PM Congrats on your featured haiku!...Milt

Joe Maverick August 5, 2013 at 3:37 PM Good to see this featured Sara..'

Katherine Stella August 5, 2013 at 11:07 AM imagery is perfect well played out on words here too was just at sisters watching birds do same thing but they were humming birds lol thanks for sharing keep up the wonderful writting

Poet. Undertaker August 5, 2013 at 9:59 AM great love sara. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2013 at 1:33 AM Big congrats for your win,Sara

Skat A August 3, 2013 at 9:28 PM amazing... love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A August 3, 2013 at 9:00 PM Sara, a lovely winning poem...Linda

Len Gasun August 3, 2013 at 8:08 PM This is soo lovely! You did it very well! Biggest hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Sara! Cheers! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed wkend to you and your love ones! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Barbara Gorelick August 3, 2013 at 7:57 PM a different take on the contest..and I really appreciate that. congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2013 at 3:06 PM - Congratulations on your winning poems, nice to read your entry Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux August 3, 2013 at 2:10 PM love it, congrats!

Delysia Hendricks August 3, 2013 at 2:05 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Sara. Good one. Licia :-)

Bl Devnath July 30, 2013 at 10:13 PM A beautiful picture of feeders kisses. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Danesh Morgan July 27, 2013 at 9:21 AM Magnificent Birds, Rich blood colored, Beauty connected, Ritual of kissing.

Cherie Thomas July 26, 2013 at 1:40 PM Hi sara missed a few of your lovely poems that greet my day with nature & peace....lovely picture in my mind. Thankyou....cherie

Lucilla Carrillo July 26, 2013 at 10:37 AM Hi Sara; I like the way you wrote about the Cardinals. The male feeding the female. i have a little bird house, but i haven't fed the birds since I've been sick. Good luck in contest... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2013 at 12:16 AM sweet way to do the kissing contest, Sara.

Russell Sivey July 25, 2013 at 8:44 PM This is a great way to show off a kiss my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a lovely piece, such a dynamic poem Great Work!!

Mustapha Mohammed July 25, 2013 at 6:48 PM Well done my friend.It seems I have alot of catching up to do on your work.Hugs

Connie Gildersleeve July 25, 2013 at 6:04 PM I love your take on this contest. An excellent Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Charmaine Chircop July 25, 2013 at 4:26 PM When a man proves his trustwortiness He s worthy of anything Sara..Lovely msg

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