Two Black Ravens

It's a rainy night
So cold and so wet
Under a streetlight
Two black ravens silhouette

What are they up to
Why are they there
As they stare at my window
In precision glare

Have they come for me
Has the reaper spoken
Is my life on this earth
No longer a token

The rain gets heavier
As their plumage deflects
They sit their patiently
Am i their select

As i sit by my window
I drift off to sleep
To a dark world i enter
Full of ravens, and bleak

I find myself
In a room with no view
Not even a door
So what did i come through

On the floor i sit
Surrounded by dark
I shout to the space
Stark

I shudder awake
And at the window i see
Two black ravens
Staring at me

In blind panic
I lash out at the glass
My hands go through
As my wrists cut in the smash

My blood drains from me
As my eyes start to close
In delirium drift
Were they ravens or crows





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Pickett Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Nice piece here James... Ravens are a very dark and mystical bird indeed...This was a great write...Going to my favs...God Bless...Taz
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December 17, 2009 at 8:50 AM
EAP, was the first to come to my mind as well James....Awesome write here friend.....:JP]
Devonshire Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 8:40 PM
Must agree with Sara, James. I kept thinking about Edgar Allen Poe's reaction to seeing the raven at his door. It literally drove him insane. Good, scary ending, too. Excellent writing! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 7:05 PM
No u had me going here James... that last line was totally unexpected .. but unique... enjoyed this tale of the ravens/crows..does anyone know? great job from u as always... have u thought about putting these "beauties" in a book yet? blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
Bourner Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 5:00 PM
wonderful & scary poem James! keep writing, and I'll keep reading. :) ------Ell
Haick Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Great write, James but I wouldn't like to have a similar dream-it would scare the daylights out of me! Peace and love to you and Bonnie Scotland! Audrey
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December 16, 2009 at 4:31 PM
funny poem and creepy
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Love this one. Kinda reminds me on Edgar Allen Poe. Is there a difference in Raven and Crow or they the same bird just different names? Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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