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Two Beautiful Butterflies

Two beautiful butterflies
enjoying the sunny morning
playing on a floating lotus
they welcome the new spring.

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/23/2012 4:56:00 PM

A pretty picture. Congrats on your win, Spandan! Love, Kim

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/23/2012 4:06:00 AM

Perfect entry of rhyme! In my community we have a place called the Butterfly House that hosts a vast vocabulary of variety...Of course you see as many photographers as butterflies on the sunniest of days. I've been know to lie on the ground for several minutes at a time trying to capture that "just right" angle of what your poem depicts. Congrats on your win, Spandan. May you have so so so many more! ps..Hope you excelled in your finals! Miss Gwendolen

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/22/2012 2:54:00 PM

Congrats, spandan. Excellent write. Great job. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2012 9:51:00 AM

congrats spandan on an exciting win for lovely words on Spring ..luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2012 7:33:00 AM

ohhh spandan... you make my day!.. congrats with love and huggs.. hope you're done with your exams so you can write, write, write! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ~P.D.'s~ "Spring~tease" contest Spandan. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2012 1:57:00 AM

Congratulations SpandAN a well deserved win Like the pictuer it paints xx

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/22/2012 12:28:00 AM

Spandan, beautiful images here. Well done. Congrats on making PD's winners' list...............S.Ronthorpe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2012 11:10:00 PM

SPANDAN.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful SPRING poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 3/23/2012 8:21:00 AM

Thanks also to you poet destroyer-

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 3/23/2012 8:21:00 AM

Thanks also to you poet destroyer-

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2012 6:49:00 PM

charming! I'm not sure I have ever seen a lotus for real? Light & Love

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 3/23/2012 8:20:00 AM

Thanks For your kind comments Debbie----

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/21/2012 6:45:00 AM

Oh oh...I just read Nette's comment below...are you Kashi's son? Wow...NO WONDER!!! No wonder u write so welll. Hey, welcome to the Soup, Spandan. Welcome to our wonderful fantasy land of writing where you can paint an image with words and all your dreams can come true!! I am sooo glad to meet u! .....

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/25/2012 2:01:00 AM

Thank you very much for commenting in my poem.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/21/2012 6:42:00 AM

Awww, these 2 butterflies are flirting and soaking up the sun..this is a great opening act for spring..gotta keep this image alive...It's 4 degrees at my home right now...you warmed my heart! A very wonderful poem you wrote..Keep nature at the center of your pen! Gwendolen

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/25/2012 2:03:00 AM

Oh really!!!My god! Thanks for your kind comments

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2012 1:47:00 AM

spandan dear, you are much better than your dad.. at your age , the depth of your thought inspires.. so beautiful!..:) huggs!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/17/2012 5:59:00 AM

Thanks for commenting in my poem and enjoyed your poem also.....spandan

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/8/2012 10:52:00 AM

Light and delightful!!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/17/2012 6:01:00 AM

Thanks Debra for commenting in my poem...spandan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2011 10:20:00 PM

Awesome, Spandan. you should have your dad teach you how to do the short asian forms. This could probably be fit into a kimo or tanka or something like that!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/18/2012 1:39:00 AM

Thanks for commenting in my poem.