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Two Beating Hearts Ravening In the Night

At the end of evening twilight, 
    into a cool breeze of briny scent, 
        down the bent weathered wooden steps 

Away from the dew kissed grass, next
   to a universe of sand,
       driftwood, seashells,  and seaweeds.   

The sea breathes deep  
   and ebbs into its depth
      into  an  obsidian  gold glimmer  sheen  

With the sounds of breaking waves 
   breathes out proudly braves ,
       crawling on its belly upon the shore.

The horizon meets the sea
    as two beating hearts  ravening in the night,
       as they whisper infinite conversation in the gradient night.

The life of the night radiating romance, 
   celestial dome empowering dance,  
      as Heaven mirth  gazes upon the earth



6/22/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Excellent imagery, Eve! A lovely write! Congrats on your placement in the contest!
Kimathi Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 3:13 PM
The imagery of your piece really tempted me to live in your world in my thoughts forever!! Congrats Eve, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Allison Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:56 AM
amazing image and imagery Eve a delight to read today:-) hugs jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Excellently done two Beating Hearts ravening In the night for their love dance. A 7. Loved always my smiling friend, bl
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