Two Bathe As One

In the crystal pure waters
That flow through the cave
Maiden of beauty
In near naked bathe

Semi clothed
Wetted to shape
Hugging her curves
Delightful drape

The coldness lures
Her breasts to excite
She shadows the walls
In the dimming daylight

She invites me close
To embrace her shape
Cupped and caressed
As i kiss her nape

She slowly turns
As we kiss so sweet
Her body rises
In this flowing heat

We join as one
As the water cools
My manly piston
As her heaven drools

The ripples of love
Caress the walls
The sound of explosion
From nearby waterfalls

Our bodies tense
From inner joys
Recipe of love
From natures toys

Standing embraced
In the dimming glow
Two lovers entwined
Sharing their heavenly flows



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Duke Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 3:05 PM
I like reading books, and I like this poem, it is destine to be oneday a classic. (I can feel it in my spirit) keep up the good work
Bird Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Passionate ties that keep your pen in perfect rhythm and flow James, you deliver the best every time.
Rider Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 9:20 AM
Natures finest recreation in her finest setting.. yummy James, just yummy. ::grin:: ~Trudy~
Doggett Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:55 PM
You rhyme so easily. Great job James, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Enjoying every word of your poetic ability. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 7:49 AM
The heat of passion is so intense that I need to take a dip in the cool waters of this cave, James. In fact, this is very much how newleyweds spent their honeymoon in my Atlantis novel. Once again, we find ourselves on the same page. Great work, James! Love you, Carolyn
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July 24, 2009 at 11:42 PM
passionate and romantic-beautiful write---charma
Goff Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Highlander! this beauty reads like a tryst between celestial stars! jimbo
Bird Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 7:25 PM
Beautifully passionate James!!!!
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July 24, 2009 at 7:14 PM
jAMES,..PASSION AT IT FINNEST,.. gifts to each other thru your poetic mind ! i long to touch your vibrant mind with mine fraught mind just to express what this poetry has twisted inside mine playful, cast of your inspiring write ! your poetry has enlightened even the likes of myself ,...nimbel yet flattering ! nothing but wisking thru a pallat of gest !!!!! a corner stone of almost bright in the poets write ! write on poet,...mine ever
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