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Two Bathe As One

In the crystal pure waters That flow through the cave Maiden of beauty In near naked bathe Semi clothed Wetted to shape Hugging her curves Delightful drape The coldness lures Her breasts to excite She shadows the walls In the dimming daylight She invites me close To embrace her shape Cupped and caressed As i kiss her nape She slowly turns As we kiss so sweet Her body rises In this flowing heat We join as one As the water cools My manly piston As her heaven drools The ripples of love Caress the walls The sound of explosion From nearby waterfalls Our bodies tense From inner joys Recipe of love From natures toys Standing embraced In the dimming glow Two lovers entwined Sharing their heavenly flows http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love4.php

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Date: 7/29/2009 3:05:00 PM
I like reading books, and I like this poem, it is destine to be oneday a classic. (I can feel it in my spirit) keep up the good work
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Date: 7/27/2009 11:00:00 AM
Passionate ties that keep your pen in perfect rhythm and flow James, you deliver the best every time.
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Date: 7/26/2009 9:20:00 AM
Natures finest recreation in her finest setting.. yummy James, just yummy. ::grin:: ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:55:00 PM
You rhyme so easily. Great job James, Bill
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Date: 7/25/2009 3:45:00 PM
Enjoying every word of your poetic ability. Sara
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Date: 7/25/2009 7:49:00 AM
The heat of passion is so intense that I need to take a dip in the cool waters of this cave, James. In fact, this is very much how newleyweds spent their honeymoon in my Atlantis novel. Once again, we find ourselves on the same page. Great work, James! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/24/2009 11:42:00 PM
passionate and romantic-beautiful write---charma
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Date: 7/24/2009 8:42:00 PM
Highlander! this beauty reads like a tryst between celestial stars! jimbo
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Date: 7/24/2009 7:25:00 PM
Beautifully passionate James!!!!
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Date: 7/24/2009 7:14:00 PM
jAMES,..PASSION AT IT FINNEST,.. gifts to each other thru your poetic mind ! i long to touch your vibrant mind with mine fraught mind just to express what this poetry has twisted inside mine playful, cast of your inspiring write ! your poetry has enlightened even the likes of myself ,...nimbel yet flattering ! nothing but wisking thru a pallat of gest !!!!! a corner stone of almost bright in the poets write ! write on poet,...mine ever
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