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Two Am Sweater

~ She played in her two a.m. sweater, wore gold in the palm of her hand Thought life couldn’t be any better, her sisters just don’t understand Sang choruses stitched out in leather, encrusted with jewels in her style Her hair flowed of September weather, October awaited her smile Beneath every heaven so smitten, now dancing away with the sun In phrases on stardust she’s written, just her way of having some fun For she is an everyday dreamer, her heart just a part of the rhyme This modern day fashioned moonbeamer, a woman ahead of her time ~

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Date: 9/26/2019 1:56:00 PM
Enchanting Chris!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 9/25/2019 6:13:00 PM
LOVE this, Chris. Jan is right. It could be a really cool song on the radio! You showed great imagination with this one.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, just having a little fun with this one.
Date: 9/25/2019 5:52:00 PM
absolutely beautiful Chris to me it reads like a wonderful lyric I can imagine it set to music:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:17:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jan for your always kind thoughts
Date: 9/25/2019 5:44:00 PM
Oh, I love this fun poem! I feel like dancing away with it ! Great one Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. Happy this one got your feet moving.
Date: 9/25/2019 5:33:00 PM
What a beautiful poem to end the evening with. Perfect rhyme and rhythm , love those last two stanzas best! Great write my friend :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I was hoping you would like this one. I thought I'd end the day with a little lighthearted fun.
Date: 9/25/2019 5:28:00 PM
Loved this <3 in so many ways ~ a fav for me :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you did.
Date: 9/25/2019 5:28:00 PM
Hello Chris,yes this woman is ahead of her time. Have a nice evening my friend. Love,Peace, and Joy. Darlene
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much Darlene. I appreciate your visit.

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