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Twixt Dream and Awake

Sol shines like a ball of flame that's unbelievably bright. And pierces sleepy eyelids with His blazing beams of light. Somewhere, twixt dream and awake, reality jumps off track. And Sol dabbles in abstract on a field of darkest black. Sleep slips out of fantasy, witnessing the sun's rebirth. And as time's held motionless; Sol gilds the rim of the Earth. Night retreats as Sol rises; and the day starts to unwind. But I'm forced to look away; and picture Him in my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/16/2018 4:13:00 PM
Love these lines "And pierces sleepy eyelids as kaleidoscopes of light"
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/21/2015 9:26:00 AM
SUPERB POETRY MY FRIEND! Smooooooooth flow, excellent message and strong closing!A7
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Date: 12/21/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Robert, your visits mean a lot to me. Emile.
Date: 12/19/2015 6:49:00 PM
how fluid and vivid, emile.. one of your best!..huggs and happy holydays!..huggs
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Nette, you've brought a smile to my day. Emile.
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