Twixt Blaze and Claw

Abuses hurled and Alcohol gurgled,
In the vortex of confusion
And blurred vision.
Intoxicated pleasure from surreal leisure.
Fooled senses and numbed conscience.
Wiped existence of love and kindness cuffed.

Lashed at the one he once loved.
Cringed and clung to her faint faith.
She and her cursed fate.
Exploding paroxysm of hate.

Her whipped ivory skin and bleeding lips,
Eyes with teary tinge,
Has the harvest moon singed.
Stillness of the night, pierced
By memories of bitterness-sodden years.

"Hurt me not", she trembled with fear,
"let me live for my girl, dear".

The cries colored skies crimson.
Just one reason--Her little girl.
 
As her daughter stared
With flaming locks and eyes that flared.

By Angom Amy (15)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/21/2021 6:48:00 PM
Wow, what a poignant and powerful poem ~ I'm so glad your poem is featured in the 2020 PS Anthology. I'm sure we'll see a lot more of this talent from you. Welcome to PoetrySoup, I see you're a new member. Way to make a grand entrance, Amy ~
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:46:00 PM
AMY, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/26/2014 11:05:00 AM
Very strong emotional work, Angom Amy, congratulations on your win. This makes quite a statement. Thanks much for entering my contest, so sorry to be late saying so.
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:17:00 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, amy
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Date: 3/18/2014 8:53:00 AM
† The Lord Of The Harvest: I Really Hate To Do This To You Neb Yet, For Your Own Growth As Good, Gonna Have To Turn You Into A Bird But, You'll Be Alright Baby Boy; Tis Merely A Reason For Your Season,'Ing....Perspectives As Points In View ? You Know, Sweet Beautiful Amy ˜ Your Beauty's Poetry Tis Amazing At Such A Tender Age ˜ I Can Sense Her Depth As Feel These Words; And Believe Me I Am A Lover Of Love, Justice, Mercy And Happy Endings Yes, Also These Eyes Surely Do Burn At All The Ignorance As Heartless Beastialities! Yet, We Have A Really Good Feeling About You As Your Beautiful Priceless Mother ˜ Congrats, Upon Your Treasures Exceptional Beyound, Featured Poem And I Am Going To Favour The Both Of Your, Splendours ˜ My Love, Always, John
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 3/18/2014 9:15:00 AM
*)*:* Making Love, To Her Beauty *:*(*
Date: 3/17/2014 4:35:00 PM
Hi Amy, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:10:00 AM
A well pen poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, amy
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Date: 3/17/2014 3:07:00 AM
"The cries colored skies crimson" - Beautiful words for a situation that is not... My best and congratulations. Brian
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Amy Angom
Date: 3/17/2014 3:19:00 AM
Thanks, Brian.
Date: 3/16/2014 2:34:00 PM
Hi Amy, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/16/2014 2:00:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Amy :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2014 11:17:00 AM
You know, it is relatively rare a poem is so perfec,t in every way, that my jaw hits the floor. Well, this happens to be one of those rare poems. Just plain awesome.
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Amy Angom
Date: 3/16/2014 11:22:00 AM
Thanks, Amy.
Date: 3/16/2014 10:06:00 AM
Hi Amy, wow... This sure cuts... Awesome... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Amy Angom
Date: 3/16/2014 10:12:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
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