Twisters

Tumbled timbers tempted ten tiny termites.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

White Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 2:37 AM
Greatness Congrats Laura hahaha saving this one
Caliri Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 11:51 PM
Cool amount of "t's!" I reall liked your lemonrick. Your last line made me laugh: "I think it's making me sick" hahahaha
Foster Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations Laura. well done...Margaret
Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Laura, Congratulations on your wine! Smile! Sincere, Agape, Moses
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 1:02 AM
Cute one, Laura. Congratulations for your 2nd place win in Deborah's contest. Smiles, Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem and placement in the Tongue Twisters contest.. a great write and wonderful win..luv.. Linda-Marie
Foster Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Pesky little beasties. good one Laura....Margaret
A  Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Very nice I like it...
O'Brien Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 5:08 PM
HAHA! Cute poem Laura! Liked, Loved, (your) little lyrics!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace