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Twisted tongue

Melancholy melody of mania and madness.
Ceaseless Swan song a symphony of sadness.
Counter to composure comes cacophony of chorus.
Oscillating operatic overture of Opus.

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Ryan Blackborough

Date: 4/8/2024 8:07:00 PM

Thank you. I've been writing some different-ish stuff lately. I'm going to say, it's slightly strange and experimental (only 4 so far, 1 is closer to my normal style). Most of it still rhymes though, I can't seem to get off that train. They're posted elsewhere but I'll probably post them here too. 2 will come with disclaimers for more context, because they're mainly for fun. A lot of you don't rhyme and I want to get better at that.

Tom Woody

Date: 4/8/2024 6:52:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration ryan