James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Twisted Thoughts

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          I inquire  
           I indite
  phrasing poetically

           Riddling 
           rhyming
envisaging equivocally
to twist your thought's

   My mind marauds
  hoping to catch you
away from your shield
    firm in mine net
        mine seize

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Joseph Spence Sr May 14, 2009 at 6:34 PM Hello James, this is excellent. I can see the imagery quite clearly in this alliteration poem. If you would like to read some more of my haiku poems, check out my blog on my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award." Great job! ~Joseph

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 24, 2009 at 4:16 PM OK. I looked up maraude. (Smiling) Keep indulging. Your writing is fun. Always, Dane

Charmaine Chircop April 24, 2009 at 3:09 PM i love your twisted thoughts,i have many twisted thoughts many times believe me;-)

Carolyn Devonshire April 23, 2009 at 7:34 PM Love it, James. Very amusing!